This is perfect.

Poor Mike!

Soooooo good and very in character. You did such a wonderful job conveying their emotions. Mikes sadness towards the end was so heartbreaking, we'll done. Such a shame there is only one chapter.

omg hotttttt ! needs more :D xxx

It would be awesome if you wrote a story about mark(who really is ned's son) and scarlet and he and scarlet have sec maybe mark can feel violated and depressed and Mike feels betrayed

interesting idea

Oh my gosh, they are twins! I have seen Mike's picture from his seventeen years and there is no difference between them (well, if you don't count the hair)! And he talks like Mark, he walks like Mike! Is she stupid? He IS Mike!

Isn't there some say that says something like "if I look like Mike, walk like Mike and talk like Mike, then I must be Mike"? You know, place your name where Mike's name is. I am pretty sure there is. Scarlett mustn't have heard it...

Your writing is amazing! This is heart-wrenchingly good. You write Mike's pain so tangibly that it left me feeling like this scene should have DEFINITELY been in the movie. It wouldn't have taken anything from the movie, but added to it. Absolutely gorgeous!

kudos beautifully written!

This is one piece of AWESOME! I love how you keep it real to the universe of the movie. "Mark" and Scar have mad chemistry (Zac and Leslie were very hot together. Geez.) So I was craving a kiss between the two, which was delivered quite well. But you kept them apart, and I think that worked, too. It's a sad ending, but one that fits the what goes on in the movie. This could have been an outtake or something like that.

Fantastic work. I think I'll have to favorite it.

Damn, too bad this didn't happen. Make me wanna see the movie again and/or read more M/S stories, haha.

Please do more M/S soon, this was really enjoying to read, keep it up, yeah )!

Hello!

I love this coupling, as wrong as it may be, I love it. Great job on the characters in this. It truly is bittersweet. When I saw the title "Ghosts in the Backyard" it made me chuckle but that's what it's all about. Ghosts from the past coming back to haunt you.

Nicely done and I will be favoriting this.

-rusted

wow, that was very very good. You really captured Scar's thoughts and I could really visualise the scene. Well done!

oh wow beautiful writing if I've ever seen it. Absolutely. Such detailed descriptions and the line "that was the last time" wow ripped my heart right out of my chest.

This was lovely... so nice to see some of that fabulous sexual tension acted on. And realistically, so that it really could have almost been a deleted scene from the film. :) Thanks for writing it!