Reviews for Not There Yet |
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Stephy73 chapter 1 . 11/12/2011 On that was hillarious I was laughing so hard |
FanfictionAddict14 chapter 1 . 6/24/2011 Usualy these fanfiction are really cliche but i did NOT see that ending coming! |
Take-A-Look-Through-My-Eyes chapter 1 . 9/22/2010 my fave line "Scratch that, do u wanna have sex ever again?" EPIC! lol and the ending is hilarious! but i feel really bad 4 freddie, but he shoulda seen this coming |
Lauren James chapter 1 . 9/8/2010 Loved it! The ending was brilliant! |
Roonil.Love chapter 1 . 7/15/2010 The ending was epic. 3 |
Miasaki chapter 1 . 6/4/2010 this is INCREDIBLY cute and on the tee with seddie characters! |
CrazyKK chapter 1 . 5/7/2009 haha i loved the ending :P |
MyRedeemerLives chapter 1 . 4/29/2009 AW's and LOL's. Sam is so Sam. And Freddie is so Freddie. HEHE. This is REALLY GOOD. I just love that it's pure dialogues. Well, I love it over all. Especially the, "Yes, dear"'s. Aww, Freddie is still not the boss of Sam. ] WONDERFUL WORK! Oh btw, I just realized that Freddie had just been rejected in front of thousand of people. Aw. Tsk2x, gotta love SEDDIE. |
deller chapter 1 . 4/28/2009 Oh, Gawd! Okay. I absolutely LOVED this. It made me laugh and/or chuckle several times. And this line: “You didn't let me finish. I'm not going to be Mrs Freddie Benson, you are going to be Mr Sam Puckett.” TOTAL WIN. That line is my favorite. And when I got to the end and Freddie is all: "My (which you have spelt as me in this) knee hurts and the referee wants to start the second half.” I had to reread that line before I got it, and I laughed. That was a perfect ending. I loved this. You should do more like this! ~Ellis |
SquishyCool chapter 1 . 4/28/2009 I'm definitely NOT a fan of Seddie... But this was too cute. ] I loved it. Haha I love how dominant Sam was, and I'm glad you didn't build anything else around the dialogue. A dialogue-only story is nice from time to time! It's short and sweet and to the point. I can see all of these things happening... especially her bribing him with sex XD Love it. ] |