I love this story so much you are awesome.

Oh this is sad :( you can put this on Archive of our own though, it's easier on there. At least for me, it's easier, since I don't like livejournal. I've never been able to use it.

This is a very cute and sweet fanfic you made and I love the to together and there kids also.

When I read "this heartbeat had an echo", I though Timelords.

awesome as usual
love it

sex scene was very good!
keep up the amazing work!

haha!
i wonder what hiro's mind is thinking!
love it!
so going to favorites...

Awesome way to put how Shuichi is prego...

wow...

you know this is like the fifth mpreg gravitation fic where yuki proposes to shu at the baby shower right?

omg i love ur riting so much iv never had a fanfic make me so happy. The others made me disapointed. So i thank you for a good read

Nice!

Peace. I too think it is stupid that they censor things. Txt me back

I don't really know where to start... because the FF drew my attention, I mean, I thought I would really love to read it but, you're just making to many mistakes... I mean, "puke"? who writes in that unproper way? you have tp use other type of words, like vomiting for example, that's the correct word. And don't you think the way they worried just for 1 morning of vomiting too extreme? when he said a month, that made more sense, but Eiri didn't knew that before? so why was he so worried? and if he DID know, why didn't he mention that on the phone? why didn't you EXPLAIN that to us, the readers, to understand the real reason of the worry? plus the way you write is like making a list, you're not making as go through the story smoothly but in chunks... hard to chew, hard to swallow... no good... sorry if I'm criticizing a lot, its just, I was really intrigued by your FF and I would love you to correct the work... because its a good idea, you should work it out.

I like it and you little scene at the end is very funny

more stories please

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