cute story! quite the lovely read 3

I have not much to say, other than this was simple, cute, and fluffy. Definitely fluffy. I like how Elazul is not projected as the all-brooding type of guy, but as one who also has a light-hearted side occasionally.

Ah, I miss playing this game. Still a classic. I just wish there were more Heroine/Elazul fics lying around here.

Thank you for the sweet fic! :)

Awesome-sauce story! 8D

I love how it's entertaining and sweet X3 . Nice to know Elazul's funny mind XD *brick'd* .

XD The entire story's really funny!

~yay! ii love iit Elazul and miis Heroiine .

(tear) makes me happy to see them together.. and ii love how your makiing Heroiin's personaliity. shes not loud and obnoctiious and iirriitatiing lol shes...a person ii would hang around.. love it good good job .

Now this is what I'm talking about. Original and funny, to boot! :D I always like a story that makes me laugh.

I decided to take a peek after reading the beginning of your soon-to-be-longer story, to see, well, just to see.

It's amusing, light-hearted and true to character (in my opinion, anyway). Do more of this sort of thing and don't fall into the 'line by line' game trap.

"...my internal compass went for a lunch break." Love it! Opting to go with option one is smart too, no matter that it didn't quite work out...

No seriously, I think you have a talent for humour, and the slightly-odd but not way-out-there impossible. USE IT.

As she said: Ohmigoddess! Your Elazul's hilarious! What is with the frolicking cows! Man, that must have been one heck of a hit. (I'm still rolling around laughing btw.)

Here's to your continuous contribution to the LoM fandom. Cheers!

This is a very good story. Very unique. I really liked it. :)

dammit, GO ON! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!

A very good fan fiction. I'm rather fond of short stories, as many writers have difficulty keeping my interest for longer ones. This one is perfect. You sentence structure is never stale, and your word choice impeccable; plus the story is a rather unique one.