Reviews for Spring Cleaning
Khime chapter 1 . 10/16/2017
Romantic and sad. Nice story.
ForeverOffline chapter 1 . 6/25/2015
Tugged my poor heart - this fic! Kudos~
Jacelyn the ripper chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
Omf.. So cute T.T baka raiden!
Kyu-Momo chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Wow... That was simultaneously adorable, bittersweet, sad, and heartwarming...

Excellent job! :)
Mooncinder chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
I know it's been a while since you wrote this but I felt I had to review this fic anyway because it's so beautifully written. It's a simple idea but you describe the emotions very well. Thank you for this little bit of tastefully-written fluff.
Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
This was absolutely precious. It was probably the cutest, fluffiest thing I've ever read...in a good way. A very good way.

Thank you so much for writing this, it was a wonderful read. :D
Outer Haven chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
So amazingly poignant. I actually registered for (after like nearly a decade of ignoring this site) just so I could tell you how much I adore this ficlet.

Poor Rose and Jack; they're so tragic in a completely irresistible way.

Anyway, I'm adding this to my favorites. Wonderful job. ( :
carcrafter7 chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
This was an awesome story, if you could, would you make a story post MGS4, where Raiden, Rose, and John are together. I know its a little sappy but I think you could pull it off without it being so.
zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
so sad

rose

jack...

lol jack

got a fetish for cotton candy huh?

so sadd

but in the end they get back together right?