Funny

Interesting

This story went from good (despite the slight grammar problems) to complete Grammar Nazi (I am one) nightmare. it just irks me too much to read. :/ The plot is good though, and with some editing, the structure will be, too. Sorry for saying this, but I really can't read anymore or else I'll tear my hair out at the major lack of grammar.

Again, good plot, just needs a better structure (after some good ol' editing), is all.

NICE! Other than some grammar and punctuation issues the plot of the story and the characters are portrayed nicely. I just now read all 15 chapters. Please update as soon as you find convenient! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter (and hopefully seeing how Sesshomaru gets closer to Usagi?) ~

i loved it

Please please please write more! Finish the story I beg u. I may be the only one to read but I swear I will review every chapter u write after this. Despite the slight OOCness its still quite wonderful. I thoroughly enjoy you're story. I wish to know more and find out the ending.

Aww! i wanted to see the showdown or at least a part of it. Oh well, it’s great either way.

Haha omg. You had me crying with hysterical laughter lol. I just love your story. There are grammar mistakes but with each chapter they get better and better. I like that you started separating the scenes too. It made it easier to follow. But overall I fell absolutely in love with your story. You had me laughing so hard. I adore Usagi. She is so clutsy and she's so funny. She doesn't know when to stop talking lol but it's hilarious. She's a strong loving and caring person. She's also very brave for saying what she does to Sesshomaru. This story has a great plot and is very detailed. It's different from anything else I've read. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see where you go with this story. Please update soon! I'm so excited to see what happens next chapter now that InuYasha has finally shown up at Sesshomaru's palace

I love this please update soon!

loved it

loved it

OH BOY WONDER WHATS GOING TO HAPPIN I LOVE IT VERY MUCH I HOPE YOU UPDATE AND DONT DROP THIS STORY

That was so funny this chapter I hope you update soon and I was wonderind if you could somehow separate the different character views please it gets kind of hard to tell whats happenibg but its funny non the less!

Wow, great book. I am already drawn into it. the only thing I would have to say is maybe give a little more information on the characters and whenever you change view, to identify the change in some way. A great read and a lot more in depth than most novels.

you do not tease sesshomaru if you value your life. usagi got lucky. once again, you story is amazing.