Ok, the first chapters were good, as always, I didn't really understand the 3rd one.

Note-I don't watch pokemon that often, only usually some of the early Drew episodes, and some of the jhoto, and sometimes the new ones.

this chapter it think was...corny...

...uh...*scratches neck*...well...um...it...was...nice *smiles* Im not trying to mean but...it was a little short and...whats the word...blunt thats it blunt but I liked it

Not quite my fav. Firstly because it's always too short. Secondly because it's a type of a sudden I-Like-U Scene. But, OK, I could take it as there's some Contestshopping. Q: Like Penguinshipping?

OMG. I hlike have to see what happens next. I mean OMG! that was so cute they started to argue then they called truce.

i'm liken this story. i really really want to see what happens next.

yay for more contestshipping! i'm totally addicted. especially when i have a paper due or something

:D

nuff said