Reviews for Kiss the Girl |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was sooo beautifully written, sweetheart! It makes me wish I owned a Disney soundtrack, too. Please write more VaatixZelda; they make such a cute couple. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this was a riot. Like in so many ways. Vaati calling Ezlo a sick old man, his powers only being good enough to make girly, horrible smelling flowers... And Vaati just being so damn awkward the whole way through. The best part for me was the squeak of "Oh my gosh, he actually did it!" :;;;;D I actually read this a while back, but when I looked at how old the story was I thought "Ah, the author's probably not active anymore" and for some reason never thought to check your page... But when you left a review on my story I checked you out and OH MY GOSH. YOU DO HOWL'S MOVING CASTLE STUFF! RIP MY FREE TIME. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sooo sweet. I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable! :) |
![]() ![]() *slow clap* Well done,Picoris,well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story, you really captured Vaati's personality and the idea itself is cool! I thought the little voices were funny. Keep writing! -A.Z. |
![]() ![]() He actually did it! I laughed so hard at that part! Ariel for the win! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness, this was hilariously sweet. I'm glad someone suggested it. Wonderful read. And I love how you mixed the song into the story. Vaati! :3 Fangirl moment...even though I haven't played his game, he's just so amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Three things... 1) why do you have a Disney soundtrack? I want one! 2) Also... i love this story! It made me literally LOL 3) I love Vaati - he's so cool. But the manga made him ugly -_- |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL I DIDNT THINK PEOPLE WOULD ACTUALLY WANT TO MAKE THIS LOLOLOLOLOLOL! GREAT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() gah! That was beyond amazing! I did something like this for Ganondorf only it was from the hunchback of notredame. This was so cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so adorable! Who else was playing this song on loop as they read this? Ah, Vaati, what a cute w'ittle guy! Especially liked that little outburst at the end. LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute! Beautiful descriptions too! I will admit I giggled at the end where the voice said "Wow he actually did it". Such a cute story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wondered how you were gonna pull this off, and you pulled it off fantastically well. So well, in fact, I need to ask you Tek... Man I make a comic out of this? 8D |
![]() ![]() ![]() That... was epic sauce! It was a funny and romantic read. Keep up the good work! |