That was just fantastic. You must have watched a LOT of the show to get the lingo down so well.

Love LOve LOVe LOVE THIS STORY! IT IS SO ROCK N ROLL! there should be more stories about Lane on fanfic. very very good

In kyon's words

" use as rag says little horse face good for scrubbing"

I always thought that was really funny!

wow that was so true to the characters that i actually wondered if i heard some of the jokes on the show, i am not accusing you i am really just admiring the job you've done here. great bantering and yes the idea of paris scaring the fourth horseman away really is hilarious. well done

I love these one shots you keep doing. Very funny. The idea that Paris scared away the fourth horseman rang very true and definitey got me giggling. Wonderful!

good story