I've really enjoyed reading this book. Thank you for sharing this. I love every little bit of word that I read.

I really enjoyed the story. But i thought I should point out a couple inconsistencies that may or may not have already been pointed out to you. First, you had jacob gain leadership of the pack back when they met with harry's family before Remus left, yet you still had Sam alpha at the final battle. Second. Is in this last chapter you said just after the flashback that harry knew he was going to be asked to be first man at his brother's wedding and thenat the end you said he never had a relationship and was happy being an uncle in harry's family. Just thought you should know so you can clear that up.

don't know if you want to change this but in this chapter you say that Draco can't apparate and a few chapters back when them first meet Harry Draco apparates away to find Hilda.

forget your inconsistency! you choosing Frank Sinatra witchcraft for their first dance makes up for anything!

you contradict your own choices, if you can't remember what you wrote go back and check, did you forget you made Jacob the aloha like in the beginning? if nothing else please be consistent

Harry/Edward all the way! :)

Jacob! no era el único ! woooo!

Se que la historia ya avanzo y todo eso, pero no estaría mal un JacobxHarry, ... bueno a mi me gustaría 3.

Wow..
I enjoyed this story very much.

Well overall it was rather distasfull for me as i'm 100% straight but sad thing there is very small number of good Twilight/HP cossovers so i skipped all the honey coated stuf and it was a rather good nove (why 90% twillight crossovers is gay i can't understand) also as shocking as it is after reading hundrets of HP crossovers thi is a first with James being a good person and Lili not it's alwasys lili who get's the truth or both usually don't get it.

this is driving me nuts. author Chan you really need to go back and fix all the switches between 3rd and 1st person pov. it makes it severely hard to read.

She is so delusional. Edward doesn't like her, he's hiding his face so as to not laugh. He's more annoyed with Bella than he is with Harry's attitude.

Burch im back from my coma

A .i have noticed, you use pounds instead of dollars and mention rugby as a sport, when in the u.s. We play football, soccer, basketball, and baseball.

You state “my clothes were my cousins cast offs “ but you have mentioned he has no cousin. I am confused whether this is a simple mistake or if harry actually has a cousin other than the one his aunt is currently pregnant with.