bloody hell james is an old man
hes like her father ughhh gross

I'm very interested... I wasn't bored at all.

Maybe her story will be different... I hope.

Woah, this was one of the most amazing pieces of writting I have ever read. :D

You should have finished this pencive story, i really wanted to see harry's reaction and i wondered what patronus hermionie would have. snapes was a doe for lilly, so i wonder is hermionie would be a stag for james? if so dose that mean harry's patronus is a doe?

Really cool idea, although maybe twist it slightly if you ever do it in the future so Hermione isn't an exact duplicate and build the backstory slighly better, as no offense, it just seemed a bit like switching the characters when it could of been a really, really brilliant fic.

The thing I don't get is how mudblood is comparable to coward? maybe blood traitor, instead?

nice :D will you be adding more?

Interesting way to look at it. I liked the way you did that.

~Tori

This was interesting-but I understand why you stopped. Nice try, though.

very cool story! I loved it!

oh wow this is really interesting! great chapter!

Thank you for induldging in my curiousity :) it was extremely appreciated! Personally, I loved how Lily was not the perfect angel, she usually is put on a high pedastle that it is untouchable. God forbid somebody write in some character faults *gasp* As you can tell, I was less than impressed with JK Rowling's explanation of Lily and Severus's fall-out. Anyway, before I start a rant, thank you for writing this! And in a matter of hours, too!