| Reviews for A Magical Evening |
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   shhz chapter 4 . 5/8/2014 You're A/H to the core ? So am I. |
| xander chapter 5 . 3/30/2013 brown really did you really need to include poop uuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhggggggggg your even more immature than I a year ago when I was barly a fukin decade fliping old but im not to grossed out just add more lemon my next review will be codded |
| xander chapter 4 . 3/30/2013 that's it im commiting suicide bye cruel worllllllllllllllllllllllll x x - |
| bro army cpt chapter 2 . 3/30/2013 ylloh roop im changing my name to xander so you have something easier to read |
| bro army cpt chapter 1 . 3/30/2013 nomel eht evol I im from ireland |
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/4/2012 next please |
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/4/2012 3:) |
| The Alloy of Silver and Gold chapter 5 . 3/26/2012 so fairy cum is brown... cool! The beginning was a little fast but the rest of it is just GREAT. Love this! |
| salarian scientist chapter 5 . 7/22/2010 its pretty good but could be better maby you could try writing a extended version you need to spread things out a bit take it slow explain thing more and artemis was a little ooc you need to show more of his icy personality other wise it was pretty good and i thing could be a great plot for a longer story |
| h chapter 1 . 4/2/2010 that was so damm sexy |
| hopelessromantic34 chapter 5 . 2/5/2010 update now. |
| AxH chapter 5 . 12/23/2009 You should write a story about holly and artemis geting married. |
| DEEP trout chapter 5 . 12/2/2009 good |
| Grouch chapter 1 . 10/25/2009 Horribly out of character. Multiple mistakes. Didn't make ANY sense. Not even mildly erotic. Maybe you should actually pay attention in English class, it may teach you what words you should use in a sentence and the proper tone for certain genres of story. I want those five minutes you stole from me back. |
| livinginanigloo chapter 5 . 10/25/2009 not...bad. a bit lustful though...it would help to continue the chapter. |
