i like this story

Must. Write. More.

Poor Roxas and Riku! They're gonna die :(

i liked this chapter i hope you update soon.

that just wrong it is so sad how could you thing like that

i didn't enjoy the story u guys are sick fucks

Please let something intense and completly violent happen in the next chapter!

*explodes from the sheer cynicism of Riku's thoughts about Sora's parents*

Seriously, that little gem about so much concentrated love nearly made me fall off the bed laughing.

So hope you write some more on this if you're still out there.

This is a really awesomely written fic :D

T.T Seriously teared up at that chapter...

And I love knight-in-shining-armor Axel... You write him so well.

And angsty Roxy...

Explosive first chapter and (lol) I barely realized I was onto the next one without reviewing.

Awesome fic so far... Love the flow of your writing.

love this story please please please update

DUDE U HAVE TO WRITE MORE

OMG POOR ROXAS.

OMG POOR ROXIE

LOVED IT THOUGH

dude this rocks

This story is absolutely amazing :)

You really do do a good job of portraying emotions through the characters so that we can feel like we're in their shoes.

Oh, and I apologize in advance because I WILL be one of those annoying reviewers who asks you to update soon even though you're probably extremely busy. Just so you know. :)

omygawrsh you should keep making this story

its so sad but wonderful

i wanted to cry so badly

and you make roxas seem like a little puppy that has just been kicked too many times