Reviews for A Long Drive
badwolf97 chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
OMG. That was so sweet and smexy and hot and wonderful and romantic and I love it! thank you so much for writing this! :)))
mutilated-butterfly chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
wahaha. you got 4 or 5 positions there.

*smacks my head in the monitor*

haha.

sure got them in a nice situation.

love it love it!
thisisup-upisno chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
this is really good! :P more!

by the way, wats lemon?
Huntress Arashi chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
whew love how you wrote this thing hahaha! wish to read more from u :D
LosTEssencE chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
I'm not really familiar with this anime and its characters, but some of your descriptions as well as the picture you showed me in our class last Monday gave me a little background. :)

As for the story, I'd say, it was good. A really sweet story. I really felt their connection while reading it, and I couldn't help but smile as I continued reading it. I think I should check this anime out. :)

Good job! Keep it up. :)
reilyne chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
This is one of the best KuroFai smut-fanfics I ever read! please write more :3
mama-Ichigo chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
that was cute, poor fai-chan having a nightmare. Good thing Kurogane wasnt far away! Did he run out with out pants on? not that I mind XD
twiinklestar chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Haven't read a multi-smut-scene fic in a LONG time. I really liked it! It was well written for the most part and very descriptive. Good work! The ending line was really cute too!
anon azure chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
aw

that was so sweet

I LOVED IT!
EmoLittleFangirl chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
That... was... amazing!

Extremely hot, but so sweet at the same time. I loved it! The whole time, I was halfway between crying at the sweet parts and screaming like a fangirl at the hotter parts. Continue to write! I'll definitely read!
Dragna Vey chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
At least you didn't say the cliched, "You're so tight!" cause that would have been a total turn-off. The sex scene is hot hot HOT and not common at all. You know what would be better? Write more of these smut-filled fics. *lol*
knight in shining armour chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
*wipes computer screen*

woah is it steamy in here or what?

nice job _