this was a lovely/darl/sad/beautiful story. it really resonated with me. thank you :)

Wow. I mean it, just...wow. The vibrancy of ALL of this is fantastic, it deserves so much credt on your behalf and how well you have written this. However, I sometimes would have liked to know what was going on inside Sirius' head-he's such a frustrating yet really interesting character. Really well done! QSx

Oh, poor Remus. Wow, his thoughts really convey how hard for him this is, and yet makes me totally admire him.

Wow, brilliant start, and I just had to pop in after Remus predicted some rather interesting inflictions upon his right hand xD

This is really well written, and with Remus' thoughts, it is all the more better! Awesome characterisation (again-thoughts) and an amazing job well done altogether!

XD!Tie him up!Haha,nice idea for the fic,love the setting and pretty much everything about it!

This was a very good story. It was a very good read.

this is a really different pairing for me but I certainly enjoyed it. It's a really well written fic :) well done.

"Cara laughed; Remus put a hand on her wrist. "Oh! Don't do that." Cara pulled her left arm back quickly. At the surprised stares she received, she said, "I got a new tattoo the other day. Hasn't healed yet and it still hurts." - Shite, Peter's girlfriend is a Death Eater!

"If Remus had known trivial items that could be found in any library were worth that kind of money, he might have packed a few more things before leaving his parent's house." - "parents' house".

"He opened mouth and sucked at Sirius's tongue greedily." - "He opened his mouth".

"Remus could hardly believe it when David Knight gave him the news, but there it was, in living color: his new name tag and the dark blue robes that identified him as an assistant at Flourish and Blotts. His new boss hadn't bothered reading the recommendation letter penned by his former Headmaster. He'd just stated that he remembered Remus from his yearly trips into the store to buy his school books, several of which ended with Remus helping other students find their way around the tall maze-like shelves. His personality and penchant for reading were a perfect fit for the store and the job was his after a shaky smile and a handshake." - My very first job was in a bookshop: The work itself and being around books eight or ine hours a day is/was so awesome, I would go back for that any day, but the pay? Merlin, it stank to high heaven!

Yay! for Remus getting a job.

"Remus smiled as she pulled out of his arms. "I don't know what I'd do with you." - Should that not have been: "without you"?

"There's nothing that stings, slithers or bites down here, is there?" "I believe we've left Snape and his friends far behind," Sirius responded." - Hehehe.

"I think two people without a clue is worse than one, don't you?" Sirius chuckled and began backing out of the kitchen." - Hehehe.

"Wow," James said as Remus and Lily levitated the food to the table. Lily set bowls of soup in front of each chair as Remus floated baked potatoes, steaks and a large bowl of salad to the dining room table. "This looks amazing," he added." - I agree with James: Yum!

"I was hoping you'd outgrow sleeping like the dead one day." - I do not think that is a thing one does outgrow, unless one becomes ancient: MY mom is still hoping I would outgrow it and I turn 40 next year, I am sure.

"In spite of the unholy mess and stench, the house was nice. It had taken Remus forty minutes—and a powerful scouring charm he'd once seen Professor Slughorn use on a failed Potions experiment—to get the house to reasonably decent living conditions. There were seven bedrooms, all with their own fireplaces, four bathrooms, high ceilings and hardwood floors, a large kitchen and parlor inside what looked like a normal two story house from the outside. Remus wasn't sure how it all worked, but somehow Sirius and James had managed to build an indoor pool and hot tub in the invisible third floor. The ceiling and walls were enchanted like the Great Hall ceiling at Hogwarts." - The house was nice? Try totally awesome, IMO!

"You running around Hogsmeade starkers because you were too drunk to remember how to change into your Animagus form is sacred?" James laughed. "You're lucky we found you asleep behind the Hog's Head or McGonagall would've given you enough detentions that your kids would've had to polish everything in the trophy room twice over." "Merlin's sake! First insult my housekeeping, then jinx me with offspring?" Sirius scowled. "I ought to kick the both of you out now." - Hehehe.

So l love this! And of course you love Remus!

The only thing I didn't like was Remus turning into a werewolf during daytime.

Still, very good.

well-wrriten and interesting

god that sounds dry... but whatever.

loving the title btw.