This story is so far fascinating. Why isn't there another chapter? Are you not continuing or are you busy with something else?

its actually not "are you DEATH", but instead it is "deaf"

Good story though, keep it up!

Nice chapter! I did catch a few errors though, but they're not that major. Can't wait 'til the next one!

This chapter is awesome, which is just what I'd expect from you. *laughs* When Reece babysits for Marcus, I think it's actually kinda cute. Great job. Lookin' forward to the next one.

I like how you did the timeline here. Very nice. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)