Reviews for Toy Wizard
the-darker-side-of-things chapter 11 . 11/7/2016
I Love it
Emmaline341 chapter 11 . 8/13/2013
I love this story. It is soo dark. Hope you continue it some day.
Thanks for starting it, it is an interesting idear.

-x-
Angel.chexmex chapter 11 . 4/2/2013
I like your crazy Harry. He is sooo amusing
Mashkai30 chapter 11 . 1/25/2013
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
juia chapter 11 . 1/17/2013
This is an awesome fanfic. please update soon!
juia chapter 3 . 1/17/2013
Ahh... How I love insanatiy! It makes the world go round and round and round... WEEE!
ao3lover101 chapter 11 . 1/12/2012
I really love the way this is going, and I think it is incredibly well written. I look forward to your next post eagerly.

-Alexi Naori
Ie-maru chapter 11 . 5/12/2011
interesting
to lazy to think of a name chapter 11 . 10/8/2010
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY! I'VE ALWAYS LOVE AN INSANE HARRY! UPDATE PLEASE!
MooSaidTheLiar chapter 11 . 6/13/2010
Harry, you psychotic little man, you. I love how you've portrayed him - he's so fun loving and juvenile with logic that stumps even 'Mione.

I love the plot and the idea of it but there are a lot of spelling mistakes. You should find a beta for your next chapters (if there will be more - December was a long time ago my friend! one who'll recognize the difference between "were" and "we're" or find the words you mean to put in but find something that sounds or looks similar.

Keep up the good work! And please don't abandon it - it has unlimited potential.
stoplightgodess chapter 11 . 1/4/2010
I have decided that I really, really like insane and powerful harry. _ Thank you for the introduction to a wonderful char.
dead feather chapter 11 . 1/3/2010
I read it all the way to here. I like where it's going. Grammar is still bugging me. No is No and it's not Know, you know?

IN any case, this changed. The first chapters seemed carefully planned and the characterisations were hilarious. Especially this luna lika Harry. But then it all went south. It's like:

Harry met Nevil. 'I'm a great warrior' Nevill said. The great warrior followed Harry and now was in a good mood.

You can't just say something is something and then that person doesn't act right. They have to grow into the part or at least act accordingly.

I was surprised that not more people commented on Snape's healing or that they allow Harry to wonder when they know nothig about him basically. Or that no one has even mentioned the weird spell they did to bring him here.
dead feather chapter 4 . 1/3/2010
Alright. I really like this idea. I've seen it before but you do it great, differently. It's interesting. BUT the grammar errors are getting to me. And hey, i'm not native speaker so they have to be really an eyesore for me to catch them. I just can't read this when in every sentence I have to think what does this word mean?..

And please say you won't use dark, bold underlines everytime voldemort thinks of himself in the future. Very awful to read.
dead feather chapter 3 . 1/3/2010
Okay, Crazy Harry is fun but your typos made me smile as well.

'they pulled Harry out of his demotion'

'Voldemort is sitting on his frown' :)

Good story idea, characters seem to be okay, some humour in it. A beta would help a lot with the grammar. :)
hpets chapter 11 . 12/13/2009
you loon, great chapter hope you find time to write more and of course have a wonderful christmas :D.
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