This story was not good...well it was until you ruined with the cheating.

Stupid fucking cheating bitch! You completely ruined this story.

What a cheating bitch! Embry deserves better than this skank.

Is Donavan coming back? Because he wasn't burnt.

Can she contact Leah or Seth to let them know?

What made Seth so mad?

Pretty interesting but it's actuallt Native Americans not Indians lol

Gemma dix here this is a slight coinsidence

I LOVED this story! I read all 37 chapters in one sitting. It's about 2 am now but I don't care because you are phenomenal! Please keep writing and do a sequel to this fanfiction! Thank you for sharring your talents with us!

I loved this story so much I read straight thru and didn't stop to comment. I will be following you and hope to read many of your published works in the future!

I'm only saying three words to you about this story: I. LOVE. IT! Enough said, so have a good evening!

I just had to review this when I saw the word Alabama!

Alabama is my favorite state (obviously I'm from Alabama)! Aren't Southern accents just the best?Well, it really depends on the type... Thank goodness I don't have the stereotypical "redneck" accent! :D

Anyway, great start! I sounds REALLY good!

I loved this! It's amazing I've been searching for good fanfiction for ages and I came across this and it's awesome! It went a little too fast at the begining but it was an amazing story. Keep up the good work!

awesome story!

i loved it.

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