Oh my God.. This story is very good.. Please continue

I am so hooked please contiue!

you have to write more! this is the best fanfic i've read so far!

Wow this is like sci-fi/horror. It has an interesting plot! So Temari has kind of like the Kyuubi in her? And Shikamaru survived a transformed Temari! I bet that hasn't happened before. But what is Shikamaru's purpose in this? Update soon!

So 'Insanity-Fun' adds my Shuffle! fic to their favoritesStory Alert subscriptions. That fic has been finished for years so I figure its another person who didn't read it but is clicking about to get someone to read their fics. Much to my surprise Insanity Fun wrote a funny one-liner review and hasn't authored any fics themselves. On top of that their long list of favorite stories doesn't include any other Shuffle fics.

This site remains a strange and silly place. That's a good thing.

I'm also glad I followed the impulse to pick this story out of the list. It's excessive, but sincere. Good luck with your own projects and coincidences. :)

O.O Best. Story. Ever. In my opinion at least. If this was a book, I would 1) Invest in it. 2) Read it over and over and over making and endless loop of reading this. 3) Spread the word and make you famous THAT'S JUST HOW AWESOME YOU ARE.

It is interesting, will you continue it? Ihpe so... good luck writing!

This is reaallly good and I kinda hope you do something with it soon.

I've never read a more interesting sci-fi story. Please continue!

This story took me several tries to read because of the intro. I didn't know what I was going into, but after I finished the creepiest, most haunting beginning I've ever read, I was hooked. Fantastic detailing and I LOVED the way you wrote her feelings. Just amazing... Great job. :)

Please continue! I kid you not, this is the greatest chapter one EVER!

Holy shit... I can't even begin to find the words to express whatever it is I'm trying to say. Anything I do say will be an understatement, but here goes... That story was-wow, no really, I can't even begin to describe it. Heartwrenching. God. Just... God. Wow.

Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, I think you are the most incredible person I've ever heard of in my entire life. I'm going to die. THIS IS AMAZING! Where on earth did you learn how to bring out plots like this? I've never gotten so excited about one author before, and I mean it. I don't really add author's to my favorite's list, but you're the one author I can make an acception for. I swear, this was so intense. I can't wait for the next chapter. And the next, and the next. And as many other chapters as there are.

Please keep up the amazing work!

This is amazing! I really like it :) I can't wait for the next chapter.

Incredible... simply fantastic!

I am very pleased with this story! The plot is firm, suspenseful, and exciting! This story is also very well written :D

I also loved how you added some lyrics from that song Animal I Have Become by Three Days Grace! That was very clever :) :) :)

Well I can't wait to read the next chapter, so you better post it up soon!

~KMU~