Gah

Great job, I really liked it. :)

Geez... I can't believe it took him sooo long. I love how Casey said "it should be you up there, not Rey". Great story, thanks for posting.

I LOVED this story,especially the ending!

i love it! great job on the ending! Keep creating stories! You're fabulous at that! -Chinagi

loving it! -Chinagi

Yay! I was getting really worried there, lol. Poor, poor Elliot for having to sit through that. How awful! But I'm so happy that he finally spoke up and that this story had a happy ending! Loved it! Wonderful job!

Bravo! Great story and great ending. I loved this :D

I've been following this story for a while now. Ever since it was first posted.

...Forgive me for not reviewing sooner.

This chapter contained the best wedding scene i have EVER read about between Elliot and Olivia. In fact, i think it is the only wedding i have ever read about between those two. Brilliantly put together.. in my mind i was shouting ELLIOT! OBJECT! DON'T LET HER SLIP AWAY FOR THE LAST TIME!

And then he did. :D

Good boy, Elliot.

*sigh* Great story.

-Chelsea

Okay, I don't hate you. Something told me it was going to happen like this, and yes, it did frustrate me because I knew it was going to happen, and I knew I couldn't prevent it because there was no other way it could happen. I'm not upset with you. You pulled it off beautifully, and it was heartwarming to read.

Personal feelings aside, I absolutely loved the insights and conflicts that went on throughout the chapter, throughout the story, and I think your ability to see into people's minds and understand them is a major factor in your amazing writing skills. You bring out the personalities of the characters well, also. Alex is a reserved woman, but she's very protective of her friends. Casey is so full of emotion, and she's surprisingly caring when she wants to be. Olivia handles Rey very well, and I love that last line. It might be my favorite one.

On a separate note, you're writing a sequel to Keep It in the Family? YAY! Hopefully you show up before the story is reviewed, because I'll miss you!

Enjoy yourself!

~ally

absolutely loved it.

ok you are AMAZING! this was just excellent :) please post more soon... I rely on your stories to get me through this long svu-less summer! haha!

oh my god...wow...I mean like...wow...

Is this the end?

Anyway, this chapter made me cry happy tears. the amount of emotion i am feeling right now is indescribable.

If I tell you I still love you will you update faster?

I will take what you write and fall in love with it I'm sure, but please, oh, please don't make Liv stop walking halfway down the aisle or while the priest guy is reading the vows! Please, oh, please! I couldn't take that! It would be humiliating for her, for Rey, for Elliot, for everyone! Please, oh, please don't make her do that!

Beautiful writing, very descriptive, UPDATE!

If Olivia goes through with this marriage I will be crushed.

Sorry, but Olivia being with anyone other than Elliot is against my religion, just as Elliot being with anyone other than Olivia is against my religion.

Its like Forcing me to watch my husband make love to another woman, then by asking for a review its like asking if I had a good view of my own heart breaking.

But You do as you wish.

~Pix~