This was exquisite, everything stayed withing character, it wasn't vulgar, quite sensual. And realistic. A real gem in the fan fiction world. Thank you and well done. Hope to be reading more from you.

I've died. I've never read a hetero story that sounded so perfectly balanced between pain and pleasure. Im truly amazed. I hope to see those other NeuroxYako stories you mentioned. Can't wait to see them.

nice

This is SO good

That was great and I've never read the manga. Soooo...that means I will have to check it out. Cheers.

You have no idea how appreciative I am of your attention to how Neuro is not human. The acidic saliva, the taloned hands and irregularly long tongue- very hot. I enjoyed this read very much.

pretty hot. well done there

Thank you so much for writing this!

There's simply not enough Neuro fics out there!

I've read a couple of your fanfiction now, and I loved your last story... but now I can't wait for the next Neuro/Yako story because I just ADORE Neuro, and I tend to try to live vicariosly through Yako :D -Hopes for other story- But you can't rush perfection so I'll be patient xD

I really liked the attention you paid to the characters' surroundings. The description of their actions were very detailed, delicate and sensual, I loved it. The only tiny criticism I could offer it that, while Neuro was absolutely delightful in this fic, I felt that his dialogue was a bit of a stretch compared to the things he says in the anime. But other than that small bit of my nitpicking, I absolutely loved it! Keep up the good work! :)

Wow, I think I really liked that! :) the way Yako thinks about everything was really fitting in my opinion! Not only in the end when she tried to understand Neuro but also that she likes it to spend time and work with Godai and Neuro. :)

That she needed some time to really understand Neuro was adorable and very Yako-like, I guess..xD

me encanto :3

Waaaahh~!

I love both this couple and the anime! Thanks so much for posting!

x3

Not love, but enough to need each other. I like that way of thinking about them. It's certainly quite difficult to see Neuro enamoured, hmm?

Nice oneshot.

cool D