Reviews for Tainted |
---|
lalasmith96 chapter 1 . 2/7/2019 update please |
Mira Shards chapter 1 . 9/23/2017 WHY?! WHY?! WHY IS THIS A ONE-SHOT?! IT'S SO GOOD! |
Koritsia chapter 1 . 1/15/2017 very good oneshot though it made me to be able to read more XD |
Darknessdawns chapter 1 . 6/12/2016 This was a nice little smut fic though it progressed rather quickly. |
kh axel roxas chapter 1 . 5/13/2014 sequel |
BlackMagicRose7 chapter 1 . 4/12/2014 Liked the short story, I just wish there were more! |
TheDevilsLovingBitch - STAYING chapter 1 . 9/10/2013 Not bad for someone that doesn't know either character. I'd have expected a bit more of a fight on Kagome's side. And I don't think Naraku is one for swearing. He is quite refined actually - his human half might be vulgar but not the demon - portraying a sort of evil lordly appearance. The sex scene was sort of cliché. |
vane-of-the-dawn chapter 1 . 6/23/2013 I liked the story, but I feel like everything happened so fast and that Kagome was too cooperative. Also, there are some brilliant writing twists that are mixed with some dull, predictable clichés. I loved the way you snatched Kagome away from InuYasha, but I felt that much more detail could have been better to set the scenes more smoothly in the lemon. I just think the lemon was too rushed and Naraku said and made things a little ooc since he is more meticulous and cruel. I love the last pieces of dialogue tho. |
ChristmasEveBrat chapter 1 . 4/13/2013 Mmmm.. that was lovely to read. |
guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2013 Wow |
dizzydani777 chapter 1 . 1/10/2013 wonderful! |
Morrowyn chapter 1 . 1/9/2013 I will be frank. I clicked this for the naked Sesshomaru. ._. |
WitchBetterHaveMyCandy chapter 1 . 10/1/2012 Huh, that was too sexy. |
Hiatus Fairy chapter 1 . 6/25/2012 this is so wrong... yet i enjoyed it |
wolfYLady-sama chapter 1 . 4/4/2012 I loved it not so much the beginning but i loved it all in all |