Great story! Thanks!

Phenomenal! Thank you!

Great story writing! So many gruesome parts but still staying true to the characters. Vampire Bella controlling herself after causing the transformation to herself is so Bella. :-) She protects those she loves. Got a kick out of the scene where the Cullens rush to her aid, then stop and stare at Fierce Fighting Bella!

Bittersweet moment where Alice thinks about the future that will never come to pass now: Edward holding his and Bella's daughter. Bella realizing there are things she will no longer get to enjoy. Her transformation didn't happen the way she would have wanted.

Will you write anymore stories?

i think that was an unconventional ending, but i really liked it. the "we're okay" is so much better than a kiss. just because a kiss would be too early in their relationship. Honestly this fic is one of my favorites. It's so fantastically dramatic!

i love how they just keep blowtorches and chainsaws in the garage. i guess the chainsaw makes sense, but what would they need blowtorches for? haha i love your story

This. Was. AMAZING! Oh my gosh! Had me immediately hooked on it from the very beginning. I love how you combined these two stories together and made it your own. Everything, just everything about it was so wonderful! The Cullen's protectiveness over Bella, Bella being a complete and total badass (fuck yeah!), Beau and Bella bonding, Rosalie and Bella bonding, Emmett, the way you wrote the attack on Barrow and later the fights with Victoria and her army, Bella's inner emotions and thoughts, just everything! So, so good :) Thank you so much for sharing!

Love this

I loved this story. Thank you for leaving it up.

Perfect ending. Loved it.

What a wonderful solution.

Nice epiphany, Bella.

Very interesting. Didn't expect that to happen.

I loved the ending of this chapter.

Well, that went well! Hope the other fair as well with their battles.

So I'm guessing that Alice can't see because the wolves are involved.