Did this all happen in a hospital room? I liked it just No one heard nothing in ICU? I must have missed something it is midnight and I have read this story in one shot and my eyeballs are having a hard time. Thanks.

So no one in the coffee shop saw anything? Cass kicking ass in ICU is going to get a lot of attention.

. NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHY!? Why?

Not bad .I like it.

An interesting alternative. Indeed.

Hmmm. I'm starting to like this fic.

ok, wow. WOW. this. is. apsolutely amazing. beautiful in every single word, every single paragraph, every single chapter. i've been looking through other people's reviews and I noticed that some of them are negative. well, I am here to tell you that those jackasses aparently know squat about good fiction. damn, this gem is bloody brilliant! all the torture had a purpose and it was so perfectly described! all the characters and their characterization was spot on! this entire work is so classy and amazing and I LOVE it. you are awesome! chears.

What is this? Even when I read the sequel the stories you write continue to DISAPPOINT. What a let down. Its just a pile of angst stacked on top of each other, and there is no plot other than making Cas Suffer. I feel like the story was heading somewhere when I read the other before, but now all I see is Cas!torture kink roaring its head off.

"...because I'm glad he's gone." those words alone hit me harder than anything I've ever read. Sam Winchester is a monster. What's up with this hallucination/something else Castiel?

The first story was strong and captivating. I honestly believe that your strongest character is Belial even if he is more of the stalker type that I typically don't like to read about. He was engaging and I looked forward to every portion featuring him.

That said I think the more you expanded on this series of stories the more stagnant the story got.

I personally think your writing would get stronger if you cut back on the torturing, the over-dosage of out-of-context jokes that you tend to put in parentheses, and the whole history of the universe that you give at the beginning of every chapter.

The philosophizing you do at the beginning of every chapter gets old fast and Castiel isn't a well-rounded character to me anymore. He's a victim. You can do nothing but pity Castiel in these stories as he prays to be saved from torture Round 50 million (it's over 9000. This is the kind of joke I'm talking about. It's corny and may be funny in a conversation but the humor is not well translated into text). The torture loses its punch the more you use it; it's not surprising anymore. And I don't feel sorry for Cas in this story because he's all around pathetic. It's a joke.

I'm reviewing because I'm frustrated at a good story that lost steam. You have the potential to be a stronger writer.

Oh, no. I quite detest Belial. Though I must admit that the way you wrote him made him seem... Eh, how do I put this? Sort of uh, deliciously evil XD

Castiel is alive (again)! And he got his grace back. Yay. Will it be a gift or a punishment? You do like to hurt him.

I really enjoy this story and I will gladly read any number of sequels you will (hopefully) write, even if I have to struggle somewhat through 'philosophical' parts, because I'm used to much simpler texts vocabulary-wise (I'm not a native speaker).

Oh poor Cas! He just needs to suffer endless torture and pain, and then eventually perish and die (it seems like ceasing from existing is always the end for this angel..)

Gosh darn it this story tore at my heart strings relentlessly. Even when I'm NOT reading the story, what I had previously read always creeps into my mind somewhere along the day and I feel bad all over again. :(

At least Cas knows Dean cares and Dean actually shows he gives a damn; I loved the moment of angel-weakness and Dean was there trying to glue back the pieces with words of comfort and concern. I really wish the show producers remade those few episodes into this, because it would be flippin' awesome (as in tug at heart string emotionally deep and full of meaning).

I love your SPN stories and writing, first and foremost because it stars Castiel as the righteous, pure, innocent, and beautiful angel that he is. And then there's the elder Winchester love which I find lacking in the real series. But most of all it's that your stories are full of true compassion and love for all characters, for all the events and plot, for every raw emotion and purpose in all-even in the characters you created. The stories are so full of meaning and feelings that I can tell you give your all in writing them and you truly enjoy in this task. I wish I can have such passion and skill in writing-but for now, I shall say a big THANK YOU for creating works of art that I can admire and take delight in enveloping myself with.

Oh man, that scene between Cas and Dean where Dean punches him is my all-time favorite. Cas seemed so human, so emotional, so pained and confused at that moment that it really felt like there was a connection between the human and angel. And when Dean said "we're done," Cas looked absolutely hurt and on the verge of tears, and that episode scene fit this story just so so much.

Gosh I love your re-makes of actual SPN scenes. It helps in my seeing the story because I can replay parts of the episodes in my head, and the other ones I can imagine. My heart bleeds for Cas and all the suffering he had to go through for this knuckleheaded hunter-because this angel loves and is willing to sacrifice everything for this man as Dean is willing to for his stupid little brother Sammy.

There are so many points in this story that had me near tears. ABsoluely beautiful and descriptive writing. I can't begin to describe how much delight I take in reading your stories... even if they are full of pain and angel-suffering.

God, I am literally speechless and heartbroken by the end of this chapter. I want to yell out loud to all that is good and right for the love of our angle: "Just why can't someone be there for dear Cas, to show him that he is cared for and loved?" *makes an angry animal growl*

Sadly, I kind of understand Belial's desire-because that blue-eyed angel really is too pretty-but I know I'll never be able to even begin liking that bastard prince of darkness. Imagining the tears flowing down Cas's face as he hid his face in his knees, leaning against the wall, I really hated everyone at that moment who has caused him so much pain-even Dean who just doesn't seem to get it.

Insufferable humans! Where is Sam? He has HELL to pay! I need the Winchesters to start giving Cas the right treatments he deserve for all he's done and suffered for them. I don't even know how he is still alive and kicking. :(