Very poignant, very in character, lovely touches of humour and pathos and written with great sensitivity. I've very much enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you.

I enjoyed this story. You are a very good writer, with delicious descriptions of things. I come from the midwest and I totally got and enjoyed the suicide slushy description. And I thoroughly enjoyed the tangled like necklaces at the bottom of a jewelry box one too. Well done! I also like that you ended it with twenty questions.

Great story. Enjoyed it all the way through.

~Snyder~

I can honestly say I've never heard of the term 'suicide slushie.' I re-read that line like 20 times and I still couldn't figure it out. Thanks for the help!

~Snyder~

Aw, that was totally sweet!

At the end of chapter 7 I was like 'No! You can't stop there!' and then in chapter 8 you kind of did just that but it was totally fitting the story. Which took me by surprise, because I expected to happen more there. But it didn't and what suprised me was that this was even more fitting than when it had (happend that is). Sorry about the rambling, but I don't know how to express this LOL

Anyway, I liked the story a lot and most of all I like how insecure Alex was - and Bobby, too. They were painfully imperfect, which makes them the characters they are and also the characters I like (in the show and your fic). Them getting closer to each other during the evening is slow but oh so sweet and I would like to thank you for writing them this way and sharing the story.

You forgot to get the gun from the steps where it fell. Kinda dangerous to leave it there, don'tcha think? LOL!

I certainly hope you'll make it as a writer and you already made it on ;-) Thanks for another perfect story, I'm looking forward to reading more from you!

thanks for writing and sharing,

Lie

Nice ending to a fine story. Good work.

Wow! This was a really amazing story. I love it! It's really awesome. And I can't wait for the sequel of Stare Decisis!

I love this so much. Could you please, if I beg you (which I am) write something similar about "Purgatory". PLEASE. I know you would do it so beautifully.

Thanks.

that ending was sweet. i like thinking of them having gotten past the pain she felt that night and gotten to the dinner party stage and being able to look back on that night with a very special fondness. i thoroughly enjoyed this story!

yeah! they're getting their. loved bobby's line, "i like us. we're good together." indeed!

i love this little dance of nonsleep they are doing! i hope they let go of their barriers and their fears and embrace each other figuratively as well as literally.

Nice fic! I'm really glad you completed it - I've been following it from the beginning. I liked how distinct yet flowing all the chapters were - like separate vignettes, but connected.

Ah, the screwing-around-revising-the-beginning phase, I know it well. Hope you manage to get out of it soon, partly to alleviate your frustration but mostly 'cause I want me some skyfare relationship!Goren-and-Eames.

These last two chapters were made of awesome as usual. I like the hopefulness, and I like how believable it feels-I just rewatched 'Frame' and there are just those moments, you know, where it's like, "She made it. She really made it. Wow. It was hard but she made it. I want to jump around and sing or something." ;)

Oh, and that last bit-lovely. I already enjoyed the Twenty Questions game, but now it's on a whole new level.