Reviews for H J Potter
FanFicKing3245 chapter 6 . 10h
Minor note, you typically don’t skin chicken, that’s where the flavor is. You might skin fish if you don’t like the taste of that fish’s skin, but you only skin chicken in just a few dishes. Most of the time the skin is the best part.
J flood chapter 1 . 7/19
at this point in Hermione's life she's 14 she's not five no 14 year old is going to call their parents Mommy and Daddy
LAB1 chapter 55 . 7/19
This story was good and well written, but the last two chspters concerning their bond and their marriage don't make sence. Even if he could break the bond, wouldn't a kiss reestablish it? Even if it was a one time deal (which doesn't make sense at alll!) they got legally married the day after the bond happened. They were bond married and civily/magical married. A broken bond wouldn't have had any effect on the marriage that Dumbledore performed! The paperwork was the same. It would have been nicer for them to have had a second wedding with everyone around then pretending that the first was somehow falsified.
mjw chapter 18 . 6/23
I'm enjoying this story so far. It's very good. However, I am curious as to why the question of "Why did Dumbledore feel the need to manipulate Harry's situation?" not get asked at Dumbledore's hearing? Wouldn't this have been the perfect opportunity to get the possibility of Voldemort's return out in the open?
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 3 . 6/23
Fantástico!
Me Encanto
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 2 . 6/23
Fantástico.
Me Encanto,
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 1 . 6/23
Un Maravilloso Comienzo!
Me Encanto!
Perfecto!
Steven Carnell chapter 6 . 6/21
For frustr8dwriter: Proofreading is a harder skill than writing in one instance, detail work. I still note some errors that weren't found. Syntax and autofill have tripped you up. Properly spelled words that mean something entirely different and word order. You have to read each sentence and then go over it again before moving on. Sentence by sentence. You can not just scan and read normally as your own mind will fool you. Even J K Rowlings fully edited and proofread published work contains the occasional error.

It's a tricky business that I have experience with having earned a degree in English. I cringe every time I reread and discover an error I missed.

But on the whole, well done from one who appreciates and understands the difficulties, but there hasn't been a chapter where you haven't missed something.

Good on you for trying.
Lottie Jones chapter 55 . 6/20
I've lost track of the amount of times that I've read this fic but I love it!
adv.charubhatnagar chapter 55 . 6/10
One of the best Harry-Hermione stories certainly. Enjoyed it immensely. Just one thing, I wish they could become soul-bonded again in the end and not simply a normal couple.
Kayla chapter 24 . 5/31
Should've made "Big D" a pig.
blueycat chapter 55 . 5/30
Loved it! But wish that you could have left the soul bond alone... Enjoyed the story
ReaderOfDramione chapter 3 . 5/25
Just so you know, its Hermione Jean Granger not Hermione Jane Granger
Zoe chapter 8 . 5/21
I just wanted to say how you didn't rush any part of this chapter. Me being the ambitious person I am can easily accidentally do that sometimes.
Zoe chapter 4 . 5/21
No don't ever think that this story is well-plotted, the character reaction is much like themselves, the descriptions are beautiful, this is the best Harmione fanfiction I've ever read.
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