I'm so glad I found this story, abet 10 years later. I hope you're still writing. You have such a talent. Thanks for the ride!
Margie Clark
lolyncut

Great, another hospital trip. This kid can not catch a break can he? I realize 'Break" is a poor choice of words, considering he just got hit by a car.

No need to apologize for not updating. Heck , its 10/20/2019 so it's not that I'm a little late to the party! I'm probably 10 years late. Anyway, I have to reread this chapter. I lost track of all the people.

Maybe Reid went to the bathroom, found a phone and called? I don't know, I'm just picking at straws.

I curse you!

No, the story is not over. The chapter count at the top of the page says 27, and we're only on 14: Sleep, whatever that means. But, as least they are with friends. I'm not going to say they are out of the woods yet, though. There could be some at the hospital who are in the cult.

I'm not going to guess. That way, if I'm wrong, I won't feel like a fool. I'll just say I hope it' friendly.

Well, I didn't see any mention of a death fic, so I'm guessing, yes, they get out alive. But, I'm not too sure they are going to have all they limbs by the end of the story.

In answer to your question, Yes, I do hate you. But since You're writing a really good, suspenseful story, I'll forgive you...for now. But, on to Reid. Now what happened? His legs are numb. He didn't use the words, paralyzed, just numb, like he couldn't feel the pain anymore. That's not good.

I hope Reid doesn't lose that leg. It's happened in other stories, but still. I hope they don't get recaptured, it's a death warrant if they do.

I have a question. Why do your chapters have 2 numbers? It's either ch.9 or ch 10. I loved the way these two worked as a team, even if they didn't plan it that way.

Even after he's shot, Reid can come up with a plan. I sure hope it works.

Well, you just mentioned they didn't have their guns, so it must have been Reid who got shot. AND, I don't like the name of the next chapter The Assault. of whom?

So, Emily and Reid ae going to spend the night. Should be interesting.

Well, the perfume has the same title of the story, so yes, I think the scent is somehow, linked to the killer.