Haha that was interesting!

I absolutely love Sasuke's thoughts! *grinning*

Lol

OMG. I can't stop laughing. This was too funny, way too funny. You've got a knack for making people laugh like crazy. I also love the thoughts running through both Naruto and Sasuke's heads at the end. Man, Naruto is so clueless. Go Sasuke, have your revenge. Just don't torture him too much. Hinata still needs him.

Omg, I was dying throughout the entire speech Sasuke made. And I love 'My murder senses are tingling'. That was great! This is so cute!

LMAO! HILARIOUS! :'D

CUTE!

Lool, I really love the way you write Naruro style xD

But, btw...I duuno, but I really didn't like how u wrote such things as "Your lucky" for Naruto and stuff, if you know what I mean. 'Cause he's dating Hinata, right? So wh should he say such things?

But overall, a very great one-shot xD

Aha aww so cute! :3

HAHAHA AMAZING! it was so hilarious!:')

i kept smiling throught that story... now my family thinks im a retard! :P

i love the way you got their characteristics right, some other comedy stories the authors change the character's personality to make it more funnier. But you stayed with it- genius.

ITS SO RANDOM, ITS SO HILARIOUS, I LIKEEEEEE! :D

Ha, Naruto CAN be devious. Lol Sasuke totally fell into that one. Good story :)

omfg this story is awesome! love it!

hahahahahaha

this story was amazing!

I couldn't whip the smile off my face at all!

And I couldn't help laughing out loud through it XD

It's was truly a piece of art! D

lols that was hilarious! couldn't stop cracking up :) _

What a great one-shot. Your Naruto and Sasuke are just wonderful. Their inner thought are so funny. I really enjoyed reading this. Until next time.