What a cool ending- beautiful description of the graveyard and the white candles

Oh my god that is the best Christmas gift ever between our two nerds! I adore the imagery of his glass box of emotions.

Well done! I really liked how you tied your story back to the alternate reality, explaining the circumstances of Spock and Uhura meeting much earlier.

I enjoyed your story. Thank you for writing it.

Well done! I liked it so much! Congrats

The story had a lot of good points and the writing is good, thanks.

I love your epilogue. Your take on why Nyota would seek out someone with whom she could practice Vulcan and Romulan makes so much sense as does the reason interest in those languages would have been piqued earlier in the reboot timeline. Everything comes together organically.

Wow! This is an entirely plausible origins story. It really fills in the gaps (of the movie).

this is great :D

Hey I really like this!

This is so sweet and sad! Spock Prime talking to Nyota was so great! :)

Awww, Bones is sweet! :) And I'm glad that things are working out between Spock and Nyota.

Well, I'm glad it didn't end that badly...

Awwww, poor Nyota! :(

I agree with Nyota on the Alcatraz thing, and poor Mrs Uhura! :(

Ooooh, Amanda knows! ;) And it's good that Pike didn't go to hard on Spock.