Wow I don't even know that you could write a fanfic for heroscape! Heck I didn't even know that others knew what heroscape was.

First guess; Zettian Guard. Second guess; Ne-gok-sa.

Nicely done. Seeing different perspectives of their war is interesting and not directly saying who it is is very coy and clever. Good job.

This is fantastic. I could feel the terror, see the marro armies advance. It would be intresting to see whats going on in agent carr's head.

Ah, this story is great! A chance to see a battle from the other side.

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Hmm, very cool, man. I like how, with this story, you get sort of that emotion behind the characters. That's just freaking cool, you know? :D

And man, Kee-Mo-Shi was mentioned! x3 You know, she was the winning design in this character contest and I was the one who designed her! To see her in a fanfic warms the cockles of my heart. XD

I wish you'd do one from her perspective, just to see what you would write.

You're good man. Keep it that way.

Lates Mate,

Sweet Valentine Vampire

Sweet story, I love how every new chapter is a new character I will be watching this story. I think for the next character You should do a chapter on my favorite piece the Mav Crav Agents

Nice! Can we have Ne-Gok-Sa next? (btw, it says on the official site that Ne-Gok-Sa communicates with his underlings telepathically. Just thought that might help, as you said he was giving auditory orders.)