wow! cool story! Pretty clever how you wrote the last scene, I was a little confused at the beginning, but the flashback was brilliant! Should we expect a written outcome for this? :P awesome story D

Oh well, what a great story!

Nice twist towards the end, I didn't expect that.

You gotta love Felix, poor kid, trapped between Hood's stubborness and Rachel's temperament. So now he's more afraid of Hood than Rachel? That made me laugh.

Just excellent. When is the next one?

I love this it's great! Your characters are amazingly in well...Character! _

*Alyssa

I love it! I love it! I love it!

Thank you for writing.

Wonderful wonderful story. It's titillating and sensuous without being offensive. You give us just enough and then let our imaginations do the rest.

I love the mix of comic relief and romance. All of your characters are done perfectly.

What! No, you can't stop there! Ah.

Awesome! Very hot, very clever...and I love your Felix. He is dead-on. Well, so are Hood and Rachel, but I just love how you write Felix. Wow. Loved it. Witty, fun and crisp. Me likes.

Oh, and I especially like the argument sequence flashback. So great. So them. And:

"I'm FBI, Hood. Shot happens." Priceless! 8-)

Oh ho, nice! Hood with handcuffs... always win!

I really should draw that sometime... it really, really needs to be... well, if he lost the shirt... *evil grin*