This was sooooo fun to read, poor Cloud lol. I loved it

I just finished your story. My heart was in a million pieces during the wedding scene, And I kept waiting for something dramatic to happen so they wouldn't move forth with it. Overall, I adore this story very very very very much, the drama, the angst, the heartbreaks! I really hope you will write more stories.

Whew

That was a reall treat thanks. Even though I ship ZackxAerith I still feel bad for Cloud, he shoulnt be let down like that, at least tifa is there now. Which by the way you kind of left a cliff hanger with them but meh. To its enterity the true plot of the story has ended. I hope that Zack and Aeriths baby is happy. Even though she's technically a bastard child. Course aren't all baby's bastard children?

Unfortunately this also made me feel that Aerith has been branded a whore. But hey at least she ended up with the man who put the dough in the oven.

Anyway I hope you read this. Thank you for TE story. :)

Oh and congrats Zack at least your happy.

There's a lot of lying here huh. It's seems the more he lies the deeper trouble he gets.(Zack) It's kind of annoying. But I know you're just trying to built up a story. I hope that zack and aerith get together soon and maybe a lemon.

Wow, you actually have finished this one! That's amazing :) I remember I kinda lost all hope that you'll finish and even stop checking out this story but after long time what do i see! We've got a happy ending!)) Oh that was so sweet. I coudn't imagine a better end to this wonderful story. Thank you very much :3
P.S. It's such a shame that you don't write anymore, i think you are really good.

You know, I was so mad at you when you had Aeris marry Cloud. But I have to say, I think it's better this way. It wasn't cliche, it was adorable, and now everyone gets a happy ending! Poor Cloud, though...Well, at least he has another chance with Tifa!

I wish I could fully explain how much I loved this story, but I'm at a loss for words. So I'm just going to say: awesome, amazing story, and EPILOGUE PLEASE!

And definetly keep writing! You're a great contributor to the Zerith fandom!

~Echo the Dreamer

Aww that was a cute story! . I felt really bad for Cloud but at the same time I'm happy cause Zack and Aerith are together and Cloud has Tifa now. I loled what Ashe asked if Zack was gay XD. Anyways great story, it was def worth reading :)

I haven't finish reading every chapter it but so far I'm loving it. (Currently on Chapter 7) It's basically a romantic comedy which I like. I especially laughed when Zack said told Rufus "What about me, huh? Do you find my ass cute? Why don't you grab it?" XD Haha great stuff! I'll be reviewing again once I finish reading all the other chapters. .

Hey, I got a shout out! ;D

I think this is the best ending I could think of for this amazing story! I love what you named the baby!

I cant wait to see your next story, until then, Ill be waiting!

Awwwwwwwww! Zack's gotta baby girl. :DDDD Yes please write a sequel or an epilogue!

yay everyone lived happily ever after :D

You have made my day thank you so much for the happy ending I was hoping for! I kind of feel bad for Cloud...kinda, but he'll be all right Tifa, found him again :)

Ugh, I can only hope to get one of my stupid stories off the ground.

Oh God.I love story is just too great!Don't worry!Take your time writing!

nice story hope you can update soon

Omg, Please update this when you can! I love the story it's awsome! and so much more! good job! 3

fyi. I dont really ask for updates from anything i've read on here but after reading this i got to know how it will end! happy i hope. :)