Reviews for Twenty Truths From The Journey |
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Trace Reading chapter 1 . 7/21/2018 That reminds me I really should renew my Viridian Dreams password and start posting there again. |
DawningAurora chapter 1 . 8/18/2017 This is such a lovely take on the time skip. |
Awkward Inc chapter 1 . 9/26/2013 Going to my favs :) I particularly loved 4 and 5. I have a problem with 6 though, as Sandaime didn't tell Naruto about the Kyuubi so he could have a chance at a normal childhood but he was planing on telling him when he was older. ""13. On the morning of his 14th birthday Jiraiya asked Naruto if he knew what day it was. Naruto replied with "The day Yondaime died". Jiraiya wasn't quite sure what to make of that."" This one killed me. So sad. |
Queen of Narnia49 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013 I loved the part where Jiraya stopped Naruto from getting married. :D I think that you described Naruto and Jiraya's relationship wonderfully. Number thirteen made me very very sad. Overall, wonderful job! |
heather.atw chapter 1 . 8/5/2013 My most fav would have to be 17 19 and 20 bc 17 was just hilarious knowing how clueless naru can be lol ...the ending sentence on 19 made me tear up but 20 actually had me crying :) |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 7/16/2013 THE HELL-! This is Beyond Amazing! This is Absolutely Increadible AMAZING! How could you write something like this that sooo makes sense?! - Whoa! Naruto can do math! All math or just the normal-important one?! - Jiraiya really taking care of Naruto! Really became one of his great-favorite-precious guardians/adults! - Kuusoooo! This is too Awesome! |
bat-tron chapter 1 . 5/30/2013 Aw, man that was absolutely incredible! Amazing job, these fanfiction's always get me. But this one is in the top ten. Loved it! |
Anoreyniel chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 There are so few fics that manage to capture the canon personality of the characters perfectly and the dynamics of the relationships yet still maintain the originality and style of the fanfic author Just amazing 10/10 |
loveinuyashatoshiro chapter 1 . 1/27/2013 awesome |
Fish chapter 1 . 11/3/2012 I love this story. I always have loved the way people can write about what could have been said, happened or whatever. And jiraya is one of my favorite character. And I liked how you wrote about him. |
Space chapter 1 . 8/23/2012 This is really cool. I like the "borderline street kid in some of his mannerisms" manly because it could be really interesting. |
Chouko Chango chapter 1 . 3/5/2012 Really touching, really interesting and REALLY funny all rolled into one. It's very good. heeheehee. I think numbers 9 and 17 are my favourites, especially 17 I laughed so hard! |
stickybynature chapter 1 . 11/23/2011 Enjoyable read man. Keep it up! |
Raj8 chapter 1 . 9/15/2011 I liked this story but then most 20 trusth storys are awesome. |
Crazycally chapter 1 . 8/28/2011 Its really great I found 5 and 17 the funniest. you really captured the characters well done and keep writeing |