I REALLY wish you'd just post the outline for this story so I can fill in my own blanks. I read this YEARS ago and have waited on and off for it and at this point, I'm positive it won't happen.

In my head, I had my own idea of how it would pan out. You said you have an outline. Can you just post that for us to fill in the blanks?

Really liked this!

I say he has to get her a job with one of his associates after that connection between them.

LOVED IT! I hope you continue the story please!

Wow this was awesome. Wish you turned this into a full fledged story. This was hot and amazing and I hope they got married and she accepted the job!

Wow! Great story! I hope you will continue this one day.

Wow, I don't know who's favorites I clicked on to get here, but I have to tell you I really loved this story!

The elements of Twilight, along with two kindred spirits connecting struck a chord in me. Fantastic!

This would be great as a full story!

Please please continue! This is a wonderful story so far and I would love for it to be extended!

this is great I really thnk you should make it a story but why make Edward so old listen your good it must be love at first sight what virgin would give that away to someone she just met and what man would admit to being one at any age

I loved this. I hope you decide to write more of the story.

I really like this story! You expressed the attraction to them so well. I'd love to see more of this if you are so inclined! :)

Its been a long time, but if you are still considering continuing this story, I'd love to read it!

Wow, I like it lol jk I love it! Great work. Like the fact that Edward was older

Loved Edward in this story - crusty, with a soft, warm center. Jane is well and evilly articulated. Bella is sweet, but the age diff is a leetle too much. 10 years less would be more comfy. But still, engaging story.