Lol I liked this ! :-)

Sounds forced... The sex I mean... Otherwise it was good, i guess...

I'm not very good with reviews, so I'm just going to get straight to the point that I loved it and I couldn't find any major typos!

I liked it for the most part...especially toph lol

BUT I think the story from Aang's point of view is a little innacurate, I mean I doubt a young innocent 12 year old boy would be so willing, or so knowledgeable about sex, he would be scared and confused and overwhelmed and in pain, and then a little bit of room for pleasure...plus that way it makes it so much more "wrong" wow I can't believe this is hot lol

hahahahaha nice way to ruin the moment toph. hehe was funny ending there though. nice oneshot

*~ashley~*

Wow, nice job! Toph saw EVERYTHING, Zuko. EVERYTHING.

WAIT! at the end it said toph SAW I THOUGHT SHE WAS BLING *BOOM* that was my brain exploding XD lol nice story thou

XD love Toph at the end.

Here's my question! ARE YOU GONNA CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY? If you do then great! Message me back! I wanna' know! BYE!

Heh. How much did she see, eh? Bet you Toph's a yoai fan.

lol, no one's safe with toph around...

That, my dear, was a perfect little one shot. Short, sweet, sexy, in character - I think so, but I'm a crazy yaoi fanboy, so my vision may be clouded - and it had a funny twist at the end. XD, we all know Toph is a yaoi fan.

Much fanfic love,

~Chance

haha nice

A very good story with a funny ending. I love it. A little rushed, but it's a short! What more could you ask?