OMG i'm so invested in this fanfiction! IT's been five years since you updated but I hope you're well!

Noooo! Come back! This story is so funny, with a great plot! If you see this, could you consider another chapter?

I understand that sometimes, fics just aren't meant to be completed and this is probably one of them. That being said, thank you so much for writing this. I first read it years ago when I was in highschool, and I've re-read it a few times since, including now at 25. I really think it's something special, especially the later half of the story, even though it's been cut off like it has. I like to imagine how it would look, seeing Hanley in later arcs, especially where she would have gone during the timeskip. Or how the childhood segment might look if you had been able to take luffy's extended backstory into account. The snake people thing is really neat, and while you're hardly the only person to add your own lore to the canon for their character, I think you've done an especially good job of making it work and feel like it belongs in One Piece

My favourite part is when Hanley meets up with her childhood friend, and fiddler's green. That part was always so cool to me, and it would've been neat to see where that fiddle that Sanji stole comes in again. In fact, the only thing that really makes me sad about this fic ending is that I'll never find out who the fiddler looked like. Hanley realizing but being so taken aback that the reader doesn't get to find out was a really well written moment, and not knowing will always bug me.

This has gotta be the best One Piece story I’ve ever read. It’s so dear to my heart. I love it so much. I’ve only got 2 chapters left and I’ll miss it but that’s ok. I can always come back to reread it. I don’t know if you’ll ever see this since it’s been such a long time but you’ve really made me smile through some hard times. Thank you.

You continually make me laugh out loud while reading this story! I’m really enjoying it.

Hanley is so aggressive

Now that I am rereading this, I'm seeing tiny, minuscule hints of Hanley/Luffy and I love it

I'm really warming up to the idea of Hanley/Luffy

I'm so worried for Hanley, things seem to just get worse for her, the poor girl.
Although, her yelling at Luffy was quite funny, and Vivi is dumbfounded lol

The fact that I'm getting so close to the last chapter of this story makes me sad. Very sad.

*pout in a corner*

OH MY GOD I DIED AT THE OMAKE THAT WAS HILARIOUS I'M WHEEZING

This was awesome lol
I love Garp, and poor Krut Thai seemes so done even though he just met him pfftt

I am so incredibly fond of Hanley, I really wasn't expecting to get this attached.
And the scroll! Does that mean Hanley will give CP-9 trouble when they come? I can't wait!

"Death awaits you." my new favorite phrase lol!
Yes! Gap is coming!

I love the scenes between Luffy and Hanley so much!