Amazing! That is the type of God I serve, always there to protect.

Hahah 1 point to Lucy

I love this idea! This was great.

A beautiful little piece. Thank you for writing it.

I like how you showed that Lucy was still strong and Valiant even after leaving Narnia. It also shows, I think, part of the Queen she must have been, reminding us that she's really a woman in a girls body, instead of the little girl Lucy is often seen as.

wow that was awesome and so powerful. please write more one shots like this

An interesting idea, I like it. Very well written too.

great story! I really like the way you wrote it

Wonderfully done - I love the way Lucy is getting calm an self assured again.

This is so wonderful! If C.S. Lewis were alive I bet he'd think so too! I love Aslan's reminder of what He said at her coronation and how she changes because of him. and his reminder that He is always with her makes me think that this is a wonderful reminder of how Aslan was a metaphor for Jesus. once again, well done!

In the Lion's Mane, Jude Blank