Reviews for Broken Rivalry
SuzumeHatake895 chapter 1 . 6h
Great one-shot! I love Gai and Kakashi's friendship. Also, I wish there would've been another chapter explaining what is so sad about that day, even though most people can probably tell it's the day his dad died.
FelixMarome chapter 1 . 9/18/2017
I've always considered Gai to be Kakashi's best friend.
thepricklypoetess chapter 1 . 4/17/2017
oh gosh oh gosh my heart crying
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
Please make a continue for this
Error 404 - Talent Not Found chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
I had a nagging suspicion that it was related to his father...well, I enjoyed that.
A Neverending Dream of Flight chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
I normally don't review after a story's been completed for so long, but I can't help it. I think you did a wonderful job with the relationship between Kakashi and Gai, and how Gai is there to help Kakashi get over hardships even if the other doesn't realize or necessarily want it. I think that's what makes their friendship so great in canon. You did a wonderful job on this with all the characters and emotions, and I enjoyed reading it a lot. Great job and keep up the good work!
Tsunade's Apprentice chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
ahh, I loved it! Its like 5am here and I can't quite form coherent thoughts but it was good enough to deserve a review and to leave me wishing there was more.

Well done!
distanceincrowdedrooms chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
gai is so cute heree :) really loved this story.
LadyDraxx chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
i loke what you have so far, and i can't wait for more
LadyoftheShield chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Something seems a bit off about the last sentence.. not sure what.

I figured- the day Sakumo killed himself, right? Gai is AMAZING and him referrring to Obito as "Obito-senpai" is too cute!
Jedi Honor Bound Ninja chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
oh only a one shot...but so tempting :D Nice job!
Tara La'Quinn chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
Hey Orodruin, I've taken a general break from fanfiction over the last two months, but now I'm back! I LOVE this story! It was the day that Kakashi's dad died right? Gai is a great rival, and I really how this story showed that. Definitely adding this to my favorites! Well, on to the your other stories!
chocolatte-delight chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Wow, Gai's so... caring. In a strange masochistic kind of way. He doesn't mind the beating if he can help his rival through something. You have a great way of showing their rivalry :)
SkywardShadow chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Hmm..so was that the day his father died or something?

Anyway, awesome work. I've never read a fic that featured a young Gai before, and it was definitely a treat. XD

Well done!
silver-eyed chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
omg, i take it that this is the day that sakumo commited suicide? well i'm glad that gai saw through him; he really is a sweet guy and quite perceptive despite his outgoing weirdness. kakashi is actually quite lucky to have him tag along. huh, that's kinda like naruto and sasuke now that i think about it, lol. the circles in life are ironic. or maybe it's just kishimoto and his ninja universe. good story, love it just like all the rest! have fun on your vacation! XD
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