i read this, while i was listening the song you said it was your inspiration
its was awesome :)

Aw! That was cute! Of course Peter would blame himself. Great job!

Beautiful! Wonderful story!

This is a GREAT story and so well written. Five stars for you and your creativity that has entertained us all. Peter voicing to Aslan how he wish he could suffer in Edmund's place just brought tears to my eyes. You are an amazing writer!

Rolletti

I love Peter/Edmund fics! Even though there are so many of them, every time I read one I get this warm feeling inside, especially when Peter says things about always being there and protecting him from nightmares and stuff. I wish I had a big brother like Peter.

A great story. Very good.

OMG! This is excellent!

Aw! I love Peter and Edmund's relationship! So sweet!

Poor Ed, having a fever right when he got back from the war! So sad! At least Pete was there for him! _ It was so sad when Peter cried for him, but I loved how Edmund eyes showed dhow he grew up in a few days! U

Peter's talk with Aslan was so awesome, especially Aslan's questions and responses (particularly his last)! *U*

Edmund's changes were made beautifully apparent in this, especially his saying, 'I love you, too, Pete'! Aw! Plus, Peter realizing Aslan was right about his love being permanent was SO SWEET! *U* *U*

Rock on! U *U*

Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)

That was good! A very good brotherfic. :) I liked when Peter talked to Aslan a lot, too.

Wow I loved it. "My love is the most permanet of all" Wow Those8 word say it all

keep up the awesome writing :D

Long live the true king!

Christy

Lovely. :)

How sweet of them! Good job~

V.

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great job

God bless you

AW! This was so sad, sweet and beautiful.