What happen to her brother and Nessie?

Can rose model for where Bella's work?

Nessie and jake?

Thank you for this story. I really enjoyed reading it.

One word, "fait".
My word? Fail.

They way you had Edward react to all the things in this chapter is just so... robotic and calm.. It's just eerie really..

It's like you are downplaying his reaction so he won't upset anyone and it just comes out as... Ehhhh. I can see him being upset at fact his mother cheated on carlise and they kept his parentage away from him for so long. As for Bella, he could express her shared disliking of how she became pregnant because that isn't her character, at least to him.

Edward just doesn't feel human after this chapter..

I don't like that.. You make Edward's family way to selfless, the men at least... Esme has a affair and has child... Carlise takes her back...

Bella has a one night stands... meets Edward, he persuades her despite her being pregnant..

I half expect you to write rose getting pregnant from some other due and em takes her back...

I'm saying it's just unrealistic... I know it's fiction..

So wait? She regrets getting pregnant from a one night stand? But also is not ashamed of getting pregnant from the one night stand?

That doesn't add up.. She can be regretful and ashamed of how her child was conceived. A night she will never remember. That doesn't mean she regrets having the child, it's how it was conceived that's regretful and she can feel shame of who the father is.

Why would they move away from all that love and support of family and friends? To a place in Florida? It would make sense if they didn’t get along with their family members but, to move when they are all so close is dreadful. If he wanted to open a practice, he could’ve done so in a heartbeat with all the clients he must’ve gained over the years, right there in the place theylive. Moving to Florida, with no patients, starting from scratch? What are they thinking. From a person whose nearest and dearest are spread all across the US, I could think of nothing more awful than them leaving all that behind for what seems to be no reason. What a very strange twist you out in there. Not a happy ending, leaving your loved ones behind like that.

Holy crap, Tanya was delusional enough to think she was dating Emmett? Emmett that has been married to Rose for forever. I am so glad that Tanya never went after Rose, attacking her for being 'with her man'. That could've been such a disaster. I am glad that her delusions never really made it onto your pages, just merely background noise. Wonder what Irina knows? Did Tanya say something to Irina about being Emmett's girlfriend and Irina tried to warn her? Goodness. Scary.

Why would he think he couldn't propose to Bella at the same time that Jake did to Nessie? Just because Jake went first, did not make the ring already in Edward's pocket any less real. What a strange thing to think that he couldn't. I think Edward needs to quit the hospital and open his own practice. The nerve of Tanya coming to his office for a very invasive visit. He should have turned her away. Or, begged off and asked Addison to do it. Why he went through with it, when he had options, was not good. I love that Bella knew Tanya would pull something like that coming out of the exam room. Your Bella is very strong and I really like her.

Your Tanya is very odd. Irina doesn't seem to much care for her and even muttered the 'strike two, Tanya' when walking away from Bella's desk in an earlier chapter. This chapter, Tanya came over to speak with Edward who has no idea who she is. She was waiting for him to acknowledge her, and he didn't. Even started to try to escape before Bella saw her, to no avail. I do like that Bella was ragey afterwards. Edward asking what it was about and Bella having no idea. Odd.

That was a wonderful first couple of times. I loved that it was in EPOV. I am one of the very few women that never dreamt of my wedding day. I always wondered how one could plot and plan something so intimate, without knowing the person you were sharing it with. The only thing I absolutely wanted was very small and intimate. Only our very nearest and dearest. And, we had exactly that with a full sit down dinner on a yacht for a three and a half hour San Francisco Bay cruise. Just perfect, with twenty-five people.

Surprise EPOV. I liked that.

I rather enjoyed their meeting one another. I like that she was stunned silent at first. I was hoping she’d keep Addison as her doctor, so that Edward would be free to pursue her. I really liked that he ran after her and asked her out. She’s smart in choosing a coffee shop for drinks in lieu of a date for their first time out.