Multi-characters fics are often challenging and demanding,you did a good work! I really appreciated your plot-lines.
Juliet was very in character,Kate not very IMO.
I even liked Walt's POV and Shannon's POV.
Jack deserved more attention,and Sun&Jin were under-utilised too.
Jin&Sun and Jack&Kate were the LOST's heart and were the most powerful and emotional couples. Sawyer&Juliet were very sweet together but not so impactful,even because we haven't seen much of their relationship.
Thanks for writing!

In season 5 Jack's reasons could seem to be weird,but the whole experience of the lie and the return to the Island had been hardest on him. He just wanted to fix the things,he never forced anyone. Jack is one of the most selfless characters in the show.
About the Incident's events,the infamous Sawyer's look was complete nonsense,he just looked like a fool. Writers made such a poor chooice at the time!
Kate already got over Sawyer,their relationship was so over even before it started...she never loved him the way she loved Jack.
I appreciate your attempt to explaine the quadrangle anyway.

I'm reading your fic. Seriously,it's been a long time,but there are still some fans around here :-)
I liked it so far but this chapter was pretty confusing. Did you really believe that Jack never proved to love Kate? Did you think Kate was just a poor,innocent victim? Jack wasn't flawless,and his relationship with Kate was ever troubled and imperfect,but his feelings were always clear and genuine. He even risked his own life so many times.
In season 5 his reasons could seem to be

That was such a sweet reunion!

"We will fix this. I'm not leaving you. Not this time."

This line is great - really sounds like Jack.

Haww what a sweet reunion! :) I really loved it, I enjoy the way you seem to get so well into characters' heads! Awesome job, and I can't wait for next chapter! :D

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I am so glad that you actually continued the story. The chapter's great, I love it when you write about suliet, because I think you portray them just as I imagine them to be. More Suliet in the last chapter would not be a bad thing at all :-)

Loved the Rachel/Juliet reunion. Made me tear up

Great chapter!

Aw, this was perfect. Just the right amount of tension and uneasiness. Although Rachel would have been thrilled to see Juliet, I definitely believe there would have been a lot of questions and doubt and all that good stuff. You got it just right, IMO.

JACOB! Oh dear!

It was beautiful. What a wonderful and amazing chapter. I LOVED the: "Move, I think, and I don't know if it's toward me or Jack. It's only air between us. Move. Close the space. Move." seriously, it was great. awesome job. :D I really enjoyed the Jate :D

I can't wait to see more! :D

So, trusting you pays off (eventually)! Wonderful chapter (although not enough Juliet and James) but very enjoyable. Only two left? I think it takes more words than that to tell HOW they lived happily ever after!

cute A/N!

the best and most important promise a fan-fiction writer can ever make and keep is to finish the story ..so will wait! great update by-the-way

Was mystery man Ben or Jacob? Hmmmm...

I'm so glad you decided to continue this. Loved every bit of it. The Suliet was great and Jack and Claire was really cool.I can't wait to see how Kate got there...

Wow great last few chapters! I really liked the Sawyer/Juliet reunion, I'm a sucker for romances...can't wait for the last few chapters!