Love this story

ffs can you move this along ? Its the same sht every chapter

The reactions of the character to killing is a bit over dramatic. While it might be understandable for Lin, I might be a bit biased since the horrible reaction Jeong Jeong was portrayed to have had.

Meh.

This story is amazing. Were you going for 'cute' when you had Jiang say "shh" and then all his men go "shh"? I think that's what happened and it definitely was very cute :)

Honestly I feel like I like rooting for Ozai. He's kind of my favourite villain.

Damn...are you saying Ozai doomed Lu Ten to death by ignoring that scroll?

"Lian had been screaming all way through the delivery of the baby, but after that, she had been very quite."

Should be 'quiet' not 'quite'.

Amazing as always

Glad to see it update avain

ABSOLUTELY LOVING THIS STORY!

Just wanted to let you know that your updates are very much appreciated.

Hmm... This is interesting
Might as well read it all the way :3

This was the first piece of fanfiction I read and I've been hooked on it for about 3 years. The writing style and character developments are consistent and the plot is compelling and witty, all over this is a great example of was a story should look and read like. So happy that you are still continuing with this and I'll be looking forward to another gripping chapter! - B

yayyyyyyyyyy! update! XP

I really miss this story T-T.

I miss this story sooooooo much, please continue writing xxx

Please write more! I really love this fic :)

Yay for more chapters! Can't wait for another.