you know whats weird, she has the same first and last name as me

omg! totally b! Continue plz! loved it btw oh and sidenote: there should be LOTS of romance! Loved it!

THIS IS SO GOOD KEEP WRITING!

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR! you have to keep going it is really good . love your characters by the way

AWESOME!

LUV YA,

SHATERED

Please keep going

it is a kewl beans story! }-

You cannot write worth your own spit. Her name is Isabel Knight? Really? Beautiful knight? Her friend is, of course, a satyr. She gets attacked during school. Her powers are completely active and much more powerful than any other child of Demeter's when he/she knows he/she is a demigod. Wouldn't surprise me if she got claimed and went on a quest.

Still like the way it's written, but I don't really like love at first sight stories...

Anyway, it's fine. Carry on.

Musafreen

Isabel Knight? Gag me with a spoon.

Admittedly, it's not as bad as some of the other names I see out there, but my patience with them has worn thin. Bear with me here.

Lines of dialogue should start in new paragraphs when spoken by different people; please keep that in mind.

I'm skimming through it and it seems okay, at least when it comes to the writing.

M... you need some ideas, though. Considered getting a beta to help you out with plot points and the such?

Musafreen

This story is lovely. I quite like Isabel and Alyssa. I've always had a soft spot for Nico and you picture him wonderfully. Keep it on!

CONTINUEY I THINK!

now I have more proof to trust CCPs fanfiction suggestions.

NO! I'M GOING TO END UP JUST LIKE HIM!

HELP ME!

I like this story so i really think you should continue it please.

Please, please continue!

This is really sweet. The only thing I didn't like is that Isabel was able to disarm Nico. It's fairly overused, and Nico has a ton more practice than Isabel, who is new; he's also a child of the Big Three, which makes him that much more powerful and harder to beat. And Isabel is a daughter of Persephone and while I have no problem with her fighting with swords, shouldn't she be a little less...advanced? She needs to get whacked a few times by her opponent before even hitting her target, if you get what I mean. Even Percy, who's a great swordsman, got hit a few times in the books when he first learned to fight. Isabel shouldn't be so good. Otherwise, very cute chapter! Feel quite sorry for Nico. ;)

Okay for the next chapter you have to start them going in a direction.

“Well, she didn't always, did she?” he joked, referring to the time I had a little crush on Annabeth.

“I was eleven,” I snapped.

I LOVED THAT PART! I cracked up. Awesome story!