Seriously spare some little time fir heavy revision instead of making a bunch of unfinished stories, this is so unbelievable, if you have no idea whatever Japanese words to be use then simply stick up with English, as for names of characters you typed in a superb error, I thought this was Naruto story but with messed up alphabets and mixing from one another names no wonder people dropped your story exactly before finished reading chapter 1.

For the love of everything Please revise this story. All the misspelt names and spelling errors are driving me nuts. I remember reading this when I was like 13 or 14 and loved it a lot but now it's hard to get past the first chapter

Interesting Story.
Would have loved to read more.

Regards
Lunary

That's the strikes. Goodbye.

It's spelled Kurenai. Not Kurani.

Also, Tsunade calls him gaki. It's Japanese. Unless you really did mean ganki, which is English slang meaning virgin, which would be stupid.

I'm confused. Naruto's name is Uzumaki Naruto. You spelled it Usamaki Naruto. Did you change it on purpose? Then you said her real name was Uzu Namikaze. Both of those are last names. Is Namikaze supposed to be her first name? Or did you think Naruto is really his last name? Or did you just randomly decided to change the order between Japanese and English and have it be 'Last First' the first time and 'First Last' the second time. Either way, the first one is spelled wrong and the 'real' one is two last names.

wow so good i want more

I love the South Park reference. That was funny as hell.

What Kakashi did at the carriage/whatever was rape already. Then proceeding to bed straight away? Not humane to the bride. He supposedly goes so crazy about her that he can't hold himself? Most common false shit rapists sprout. NOT how men work.

Ha good beginning. Ha she pull a Hinata.

our precious~

HOW THE FUCK ARE YOU ALIVE SON Like u should. be dead and gone

he said OMG

well this escalated quickly