Reviews for The Fine Line |
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Saya chapter 1 . 5/7 God, loved it. The buildup, wow I hate you and I love you right now. |
CallieSkye chapter 5 . 1/24/2017 arrrrrrgghhhh! You're killing me! That was sooo good! You can't end it like that! |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/9/2016 This was perfect. Smoldering and slow, sensual and sweet. In character. Loved it! |
twinningbigtime chapter 5 . 12/24/2015 Where's the rest?! Aghhhhrrrrrrrr |
inreverie89 chapter 5 . 10/11/2015 Nooooo! You cant leave it this way. This is the best intimate situation of Ron And Hermione! Why must it be a missing moment? Please have it finished another way that all fans, and even Ron and Hermione themselves, had dreamt a bout for a long time! Other than that, thanks for writing. Beautiful. Beautiful. |
moonlightmila chapter 5 . 11/16/2012 That was one of the most sensual stories I've ever read. Great job! :) Sam. |
J. K. Schiffelbein chapter 5 . 1/14/2012 I officially want to throw a shoe at you... Great job :) |
Daisy1794 chapter 5 . 10/22/2011 This story is so beautiful! At the end I was like PLEASE GET TOGETHER! Damn Harry..love him but still! SO CLOSE!. Loved it so much :) |
forgetmenotjimmy chapter 5 . 9/28/2011 Noooo! They were so close! Great characterisations here and I loved the build up, nice one! :D |
w0nd3rw1tch chapter 5 . 8/28/2011 God this story was so good! I've read so many Romione stories that seemed really rushed and not plausible, but yours was amaze-balls! I also really liked how they didn't have sex just because they were in that situation, that would've been too OOC. This is in the top 5 Romione's I've ever read :) |
Booklover13098 chapter 5 . 8/2/2011 Is that it? Please tell me there's more or somethin like a sequel |
All My Stumbling Phrases chapter 4 . 7/28/2011 I really felt your words flowed well and you did very well with description. Great job! I'd also really like it if you came up with a fic where that discussion of whether or not swearing is a turn-on actually happened! |
emmagraceling chapter 5 . 7/11/2011 Okay, I like this story, but I DEFINITELY think it should be rated M. I mean, this is worse than a lot of m rated stories. |
Bluerain22 chapter 5 . 2/28/2011 Aww! Bitter sweet ending! Loved the build up! You write Ron and Hermione just the way they should be. |
Bluerain22 chapter 4 . 2/28/2011 Heavanly! |