So... did you really make Arthur and one of his descendants make out or am I mixed up..?

This was a phenominal chapter, bud! I really enjoyed it, and hope you enjoyed writing it.

I figured it was his spell book.
You know, you're doing a good job writing all the characters. Did you take a writing class, or did you teach yourself?

Does that mean Arthur made out with one of his descendants? Dude! Not cool!

(Am enjoying the story)

I really love it but can you write an epilogue of Merlin meeting little Arthur? X

It was wonderful, thanks. I'm sad that there was no reveal, I can only assume that it happened later. And I wish Pippa would have an explanation for Ellie's sudden change in circumstances. But well-written, with a good idea and excellent sentence structure and grammar. I'm looking forward to reading mor of what you've written.

I'm glad Arthur is upset about the uneaten deer. And shocked when he asked Ellie if they could please keep hunting. And confused about why Merlin wasn't in the legend/history books, too old and wizardy, I guess. And dad who figured out who Merlin was, was awesome - how could he possibly let Merlin get away and go to sleep?

Fascinating, thanks!

Excellent chapter, but I can't imagine Arthur would be able to spend hours looking at Arthurian legends and not learn about Merlin.

That's my spell book - fantastic!

Very nice. I like the Merlin chapters better than the Arthur chapters, perhaps because I like Nick and Pippa better. Thanks so much for writing this!

Shopping scares me too. Arthur's right.

Nooooo! Merlin wouldn't cheat at cards! He cheated at dice but Arthur deserved it!

Yay Arthur for finally being useful!

I love your Merlin reading Harry Potter!