That was so sexy and I love the idea of Rachel domming Ivy.

Very good job on this, I really hope you'll put out a sequal.

Just filtering my inbox and I came to this. Short sweet and touching. I just have to wonder if maybe on different nights the roles are switched. Since both of them come off as very strong individuals. Yet even than it fits since Rachel always seems to have a pressence of control over Ivy. anyway till next time later.

Wow.

A thousand times wow...

Getting into Ivy's POV for that was great, and especially that she really needed to LET Rachel dominate her... the please thing was great, as was Ivy's metaphorical description of what Rachel was doing to her... not above an R rating, but the emotions made it really hot...

Great job! Thanks for the story!

HOT! And all too short! ;)

Woo Ivy is whiped. It's sweet. Nice story

whoo... well /someone/ was in a mood... not that us readers will complain... I'm proud so say I'm starting on book #3 now... my lazy butt just finished the second one. *grins*

~dreamer

This is fan-flippin-tastic. Love that it's from Ivy's pov and shows how much she enjoys Rachel going all dominate. Also, it's completely hot.

Ha ha, I'm pretty sure that I've said this before, but I keep on wondering how exactly you do it-crank out fic after fic, I mean. It's like...insane. Insanely good, of course, but still. I am in awe. I updated a chapter a couple days ago and I was all giddy because I had finally (FINALLY) updated but that has nothing on you. I find the difference between our crankout rate highly amusing-the realization made me laugh really hard. I think I shall try do channel my inner fembuck and be awesome. Well. Here's hoping, at least.

i dont think ill ever think of little red riding hood the same way but i like that fact very short and sweet

lia