| Reviews for Moonfire |
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   Dr1zzy chapter 9 . 11/24/2019 Good story |
| rachel625 chapter 9 . 8/18/2019 love this story! |
| WinterVellichor chapter 9 . 6/13/2019 This was extremely well written! Read the whole thing in a day. |
| Alliecat445 chapter 9 . 10/12/2018 aww that was such a good story, good job |
| BeckieT108 chapter 1 . 6/12/2018 I can't believe this is your first fanfic. It is very well written. I am really excited to continue reading. BeckieT108 |
| Alice chapter 9 . 12/29/2017 Oscar worth fanfic. It has everything the public want: love, friends, drama, fun, games, fights, sex, nature, and a constant half naked Jacob Black, lol |
| sarahmicaela88 chapter 5 . 12/18/2016 Yes she will cause shes Bea. No one knws how to fuck up and fuck with people in the most sadistic way possible like her. Especially the one in this story. She judges Leah for being a bitch and making others miserable. Well sweetheart guess what? Ur not any better cause you cant decide what the fuck u want. And when u seem to be making progress of moving forward. U manage to fuck shit up even worse than before. And poor Jake is ur own personal punching bag. And u seem to enjoy every blow u give him. |
| sarahmicaela88 chapter 4 . 12/18/2016 The biggest cockblocker is Quil. How he's still alive I dont knw. |
| sarahmicaela88 chapter 9 . 12/18/2016 Dont wanna hate but Jake should've never come back. Bea doesnt deserve him. She's such a bitch who doesnt knw whats good for her. Even if it was a ruse that was sadistic and cruel. |
| sarahmicaela88 chapter 3 . 12/18/2016 Seriously I just wanna slap this girl and tell her get the fuck over it already. |
| sarahmicaela88 chapter 2 . 12/18/2016 Sorry but its kinda hard to feel sympathy for Bea cause she did do that. And it was because of what Leah said. Was it tactful, not exactly. But Bea keeps herself in that misery because she wants to. If she wants people to stop talking shit then she needs to grow a fucking spine, get over herself cause she's not the first one to go through a heartbreak, and just the fuck on. Leah maybe even did her huge favor here. |
| sarahmicaela88 chapter 1 . 12/18/2016 Oh God I just wanna tell her shut the fuck up. You're in love with someone that left for dead in the middle of the woods that split months ago and left you comatose. Yeah he sounds like a real winner. I could see why you would hold a candle to him. |
| moraine9 chapter 9 . 11/20/2016 That was damn sexy, thanks for the great story! |
| alh1971 chapter 9 . 10/7/2016 Great job. Loved it. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/17/2016 While I do like your story, I got to admit the whole Leah being a bitch and her own pack being assholes is a bit played out. But I'm still interested to see how you you play it out |
