I loved it...!

Damn you Van Slanzar y Fanel! i will kill you by cheating Hitomi!

Everything was well and dandy... Until the 6 chapter and all the ophelia soul mate... Better left unsaid. I mean even in this universe is so convoluted to accept and you can't pass that much time with someone without bonding. Great story nonetheless. Thanks for sharing.

I love this story, it's just the right length and keeps you on the edge of your seat.

Enjoy the fact that this story is still being read and fully enjoyed!

So happy he wasn't two timing on purpose. I was so anxious the past few chapters so I'm just so relieved everything's better now. Hope this keeps up!

This story is so interesting! I like the way it's written and I love the direction it's going, even if it isn't completely clear at this point. Glad I found this! :)

I honestly don't normally review, but I really loved this story so I thought you should know. Thanks for the good read. C:

Thank you for this story! I loved it. :)

OK, my Van/Hitomi side is really, really, really happy about the outcome. I like that you named their son Folken

But my more realistic/sadistic side is screaming that this was too easy. I understand the Draconian/soulmate thing, but i would have want Van to actually have feelings for Ophelia(even a tiny tiny tiny bit), and her being a normal girl (not the materialization of his fantasy). It's way too easy and unfair (for Ophelia) to put everything on some kind of magic, curse, destiny or whatever...

It was really good tho. My heart was racing while reading. I think you mostly stayed into-character: Hitomi, her reactions and all, i could totally see that coming. Van seemed more mature and calmer (but then, i'm used to and only know the 15 years old Van. So it's ok). Merle was awesome.

Sincerely, you wrote a really, really good story

You evil!

You broke my heart.

Thank you for the story. Not for the heartbreak tho

OMG whaaat? Ok i admit i saw that coming, but still... arggghh
This is so unfair...

Btw, you're the only one who made me finally appreciate Allen/Hitomi. Thank you, or not... i don't know. I'm still a little confused.

I'm the faithful/loyal type, so Van/Ophelia makes me really, really mad, right now...

Anyway... Thank you for the story, thank you for sharing.

I think that was just the perfect lemon. I could totally feel the love and 10 years of longing in that scene. It was like looking through Van's eyes and seeing how he perceives Hitomi as a perfect goddess. When they finally come together, it is steamy and sensual. You did a wonderful job of writing this story.

Im am abit confused with what folken said... But other than that awesoem story

Oh My God. I can honestly say this was one of if not THE top fanfiction of Escaflowne I've read( and I've read a LOT). I love how you really showed the difference in the planets, respecting that, of course, Gaea has a different culture. Plus the Ophelia twist was perfect and made me tear up. I do hope Falco got a happy ending. :C Thank you so much for this beautiful piece of writing.

P.S. Yay for hot VanTomi smexiness! ;3

Oh My God. I can honestly say this was one of if not THE top fanfiction of Escaflowne I've read( and I've read a LOT). I love how you really showed the difference in the planets, respecting that, of course, Gaea has a different culture. Plus the Ophelia twist was perfect and made me tear up. I do hope Falco got a happy ending. :C Thank you so much for this beautiful piece of writing.