I love the Story!

I love the story. Sad what happened to Misty's business but still a nice fic.
Sadly I won't read the sequel. It looks like you are setting up Serena and Jackass -I mean Gary and I won't support that.

Thanks for sharing.

Calling it now, if Serena ends up with Gary I'm gonna be pissed. She doesn't deserve to be paired with that piece of shit.

Wonderful story! It was well written and the plot was great! It was a great read!

Wow! That was indeed a very long story! But it was SUPER COOL n CUTE! It was so Awesome and you got me so hyped up that I finished the story in two days (whenever I had time, obviously)..but still I am not reading guy and you still got me there.. You are a great writer.. No doubt with that..

Serena is actually used in Pokémon XYZ

It's weird now that there is actually a Serena in the show

Great funny and realiatic.
The "bachelor pad" was hilarious so was
the interaction between gary and serena.
Best pokeshipping story I have ever read.

PLEASE COME UP WITH A SEQUEL.
GO POKESHIPPING!

This was truly amazing, I love the plot and how you made this realistic without the Pokémon and all, it really gives it another perspective. I enjoyed reading this series and encourage you to continue your writing. I've always loved Pokémon and especially ash and Misty and i believe our community is truly blessed with amazingly people, while psst them other shippers are crazy One thing I've learned being in the Pokémon community and most of all the pokeshipping community, is that you must stick up for what you believe is right and what you believe in, and don't ever give up. I've also learned no matter if your belief isn't canon, or also referring to real life matters, you just got to keep believing and keep what makes you happy in your heart. Pursue after your dreams and stick up for what you want, and make a stand.

-Caandyy

Near the end of final chapter I acually started jolting many from my eyes as Ash proposed to Misty. This story is amazing! The story is great and one of the reasons I read it is because I believe I will never experiance love. Keep up the good work man. Hope everyone else had a good time reading it.

I hope you'll come back someday.
I noticed you did have a hiatus between 2003 and 2009 and I hope this is just another long hiatus XD
Your stories were so great, I really do hope you'll come back to us!

What's the sequel?

Sequel needs to be finitoed

Wow very interesting and Misty will soon know "Alvin" is Ash!

OMG!
I don't know what to say? I've been reading this fic for few hours xD
I shouldn't be up at this time, but your fic kept me awake.
It was the bestest story I ever read. No doubt with that. I'm not a big fan of drama, but I LOVE it.
I love Serena's character! I'm sure Gary and Serena would make cute and adorable couple.
Todd and Duplica, they are beyond amazing. I love the way how they got together. Seriously!
We haven't had much of Melody and Ritchie, but they were amazing too!
And lastly Ash and Misty! AH! Indeed, I really don't know what to say about them. I love the way how Ash showed up, only to pull a harmless (?) prank. I love the people's reaction when they came to know about Ash's identity. It is a small word indeed!